
2/17/2011 c1
612simpleplan13
I know you said you didn't want constructive criticism, but there is a typo in your a/n. You have an instead of an. Also, I thought the punctuation was a bit weird 'cause it wasn't really grammatically correct.
Anyway, I thought the piece was really sweet. I've lost some pets with which I was close (though never a dog) so I can definitely relate to the sentiment. Well done.

I know you said you didn't want constructive criticism, but there is a typo in your a/n. You have an instead of an. Also, I thought the punctuation was a bit weird 'cause it wasn't really grammatically correct.
Anyway, I thought the piece was really sweet. I've lost some pets with which I was close (though never a dog) so I can definitely relate to the sentiment. Well done.