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2/17/2011 c1 612simpleplan13
I know you said you didn't want constructive criticism, but there is a typo in your a/n. You have an instead of an. Also, I thought the punctuation was a bit weird 'cause it wasn't really grammatically correct.

Anyway, I thought the piece was really sweet. I've lost some pets with which I was close (though never a dog) so I can definitely relate to the sentiment. Well done.
10/18/2010 c1 4Keree
Aww this is so sad! Reminds me when I lost my horse, bullet (I have a poem posted about him too). Now I'm crying. The indepth love shows.

~Keree

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