for in glass jars12/27/2012 c1 
70Naver
Your writing is amazing. That was such an impressive image in my mind you made. Amazing.
70NaverYour writing is amazing. That was such an impressive image in my mind you made. Amazing.
6/7/2011 c1 112SmashedIce.X
Okay - wow, this blew my mind! Brilliant writing, I loved reading this! :)
112SmashedIce.XOkay - wow, this blew my mind! Brilliant writing, I loved reading this! :)
3/14/2011 c1 2Cirbra
I can see dark brick coffeehouses with rings of smoke curling up from the tables when I read this (especially in the second and third parts). Very impressive.
2CirbraI can see dark brick coffeehouses with rings of smoke curling up from the tables when I read this (especially in the second and third parts). Very impressive.
11/27/2010 c1 natmarie
Stunning. Love your word choice. Don't know how I missed this one. Vivid imagery and the like as well. Awesomeness
Stunning. Love your word choice. Don't know how I missed this one. Vivid imagery and the like as well. Awesomeness
11/14/2010 c1 29imploding supernova
the last line had this really big impact. "violent" and "beauty"-two words that added so much intensity to the whole piece. loved it. :D
29imploding supernovathe last line had this really big impact. "violent" and "beauty"-two words that added so much intensity to the whole piece. loved it. :D
10/27/2010 c1 2LunarGirl
i can't even begin to describe how excited i was to see that you had uploaded a new poem.
and as usual, this is stunning, breathtaking, and wonderful. i love the way you divided the poem into 4 sections.
2LunarGirli can't even begin to describe how excited i was to see that you had uploaded a new poem.
and as usual, this is stunning, breathtaking, and wonderful. i love the way you divided the poem into 4 sections.
10/16/2010 c1 12Imminent Paradox
I'm pretty sure I could give you a list of ten words and you could throw them onto a piece of paper and it would still sound like a masterpiece. Seriously.
Like with all of your work, I am in love with this!
I'm not even able to soak in the big picture of it yet (I'm not positive I ever will) but it's still absolutely, purely, incredibly (and every other "ly" word that has positive connotations) amazing!
Great to read something from you again :)
12Imminent ParadoxI'm pretty sure I could give you a list of ten words and you could throw them onto a piece of paper and it would still sound like a masterpiece. Seriously.
Like with all of your work, I am in love with this!
I'm not even able to soak in the big picture of it yet (I'm not positive I ever will) but it's still absolutely, purely, incredibly (and every other "ly" word that has positive connotations) amazing!
Great to read something from you again :)
10/14/2010 c1 9Narq
Long time no see!
I miss your writing a lot!
I especially love the first line, "orphans of risk are paper dolls/soaked in gasoline"
But haha, like your other poem, I still don't quite get what you're talking about (ie, I don't get the 'concrete' side of things), still, it's a lovely combination of words!
9NarqLong time no see!
I miss your writing a lot!
I especially love the first line, "orphans of risk are paper dolls/soaked in gasoline"
But haha, like your other poem, I still don't quite get what you're talking about (ie, I don't get the 'concrete' side of things), still, it's a lovely combination of words!
10/13/2010 c1 3schizosophia
Perhaps if I contain this awe I feel after reading your work and sit quietly for a moment, I could recover just enough to actually say something intelligent. Maybe.
You deserve that rewarding feedback.
I admire your talent. "Beautiful insomniac" especially blew my mind.
Briana
3schizosophiaPerhaps if I contain this awe I feel after reading your work and sit quietly for a moment, I could recover just enough to actually say something intelligent. Maybe.
You deserve that rewarding feedback.
I admire your talent. "Beautiful insomniac" especially blew my mind.
Briana