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11/24/2010 c1 prose seed
Many thanks for the review of my work. i have read your work and feel you have an affinity for emotional poetry from what i gather thus far. Bearing in mind i will read more, i love the way this one in particular switches from well structured formal use of couplets and then bold statements, 'a blinded slaughter...killing innocents' which really reflects that emotion you're drawing out!

Bless!
11/18/2010 c1 82Then They call me M
I couldn't help this sinking feeling in me as I was reading. Good job, I guess.

And your name is Vegetarian Meatballs? I freaking love vegetarian meatballs, the Morning Star brand. DAM. Why would anyone ever eat meat I do not know...

great job! keep writing!
10/20/2010 c1 XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
i like it...

full of despair...
10/19/2010 c1 81Princess-anna57
Great job, I like this one a lot! Keep it up!

~Anna~ ^_^

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