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for what is love?

8/9/2013 c1 xxxyx
This is a poem without a definite pattern, but works anyway. Just I think that 'u' should be spelled 'you' and 'cant,' 'can't.'

I like the theme of trying to understand what 'love' is. In the end, I believe it all differs from one person to one person, as long as he cherishes the idea of his or her definition of 'love.'

Good luck. :)
8/8/2013 c1 Ftxnn
Good. I don't know anything about love either so yeah XD but your understanding of love is quite nice in my opinion! :)
10/12/2011 c1 6CelticX
I really did like the poem. It made me think about what I think love is to me. I will tell you that being young is not an obstacle in knowing what love is. I'm 53 years old and love's definition sometimes changes for me every day.

Ultimately, if the object of poetry is to make a person think, then you have definitely hit the mark.
9/9/2011 c1 6Richard Omega
What a nice poem, good job :D! it's true that was love is, when you want to stay and protect that person.
4/26/2011 c1 119SomeRandomScribbles
Good piece! The flow is great, and your choice of language is good too. Some more proof-reading would help - for example, you've written "you" as u once or twice. Some of the longer lines would also probably be better separated into two lines. I like the ideas you express here, and I really love the first three lines :)

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