1/13/2011 c1 fireman2147
This story is awesome Jess :)

-Nick

10/30/2010 c1 2VC Wolffe
Interesting.

So your changing from two different perspectives through out the story? Will that continue to the end?

Anyway, Looks good.

I personally would like to read more about the characters. But i suppose your holding some small details back in order to hook your readers?

What about the setting? Is that something that might be reviled later on?

I am a little contused about the time, place, etc.

None-the-less, it reads like a good story. And i would like to see more.