for Penumbrae8/15/2014 c30 
1my princess ending
OH MY GOODNESS. ETHEL. I WOULD'VE NEVER GUESSED. I APPLAUD YOUR CREATIVITY. I'm genuinely shocked because I would've never guessed Ethel and a part of my always thought of her as an innocent little sister that loved her brother and only as a brother but as I read the excerpts as Ethel, I'm starting to think she's more evil than Grace.
1my princess endingOH MY GOODNESS. ETHEL. I WOULD'VE NEVER GUESSED. I APPLAUD YOUR CREATIVITY. I'm genuinely shocked because I would've never guessed Ethel and a part of my always thought of her as an innocent little sister that loved her brother and only as a brother but as I read the excerpts as Ethel, I'm starting to think she's more evil than Grace.
8/14/2014 c29 my princess ending
I'm honestly dying and screaming because I truly believed they were going to kiss BUT THEY DIDN'T. I'm screaming my brains out because it's not fair! I was also really looking forward to reading about Celeste and her days but oh well!
I loved reading how Caelum and Eidan were fighting for control because whenever they're fighting, it's in Eidan's POV and it's just refreshing to read it in a new perspective.
I'm honestly dying and screaming because I truly believed they were going to kiss BUT THEY DIDN'T. I'm screaming my brains out because it's not fair! I was also really looking forward to reading about Celeste and her days but oh well!
I loved reading how Caelum and Eidan were fighting for control because whenever they're fighting, it's in Eidan's POV and it's just refreshing to read it in a new perspective.
8/14/2014 c25 my princess ending
I never thought I would say this but I wish Grace's plan would've worked because it so deserved to. The Earth Kingdom deserves to be turned into stone and the King deserves to die. I'm not sorry for saying that because he's disgusting.
I never thought I would say this but I wish Grace's plan would've worked because it so deserved to. The Earth Kingdom deserves to be turned into stone and the King deserves to die. I'm not sorry for saying that because he's disgusting.
8/14/2014 c24 my princess ending
I absolutely love the small italic parts at the end of the chapter that talk about Celeste and Caelum. I believe it is about Celeste and Caelum. It's so bitter sweet because I can see how forbidden their relationship is and it hurts my soul.
By the way, Zeph doesn't deserve the things that are happening to him and I would appreciate it if you didn't torture him every other chapter. Thanks. But I love you anyway.
I absolutely love the small italic parts at the end of the chapter that talk about Celeste and Caelum. I believe it is about Celeste and Caelum. It's so bitter sweet because I can see how forbidden their relationship is and it hurts my soul.
By the way, Zeph doesn't deserve the things that are happening to him and I would appreciate it if you didn't torture him every other chapter. Thanks. But I love you anyway.
8/13/2014 c19 my princess ending
I would just like to guess that Ethel took over the power that Eidan had and that's why she did something stupid. And Grace is weak because she wasn't able to take over the power. But I might be wrong so oops!
I would just like to guess that Ethel took over the power that Eidan had and that's why she did something stupid. And Grace is weak because she wasn't able to take over the power. But I might be wrong so oops!
8/13/2014 c18 my princess ending
Air is my favorite element out of all the elements so of course I would love the air kingdom. It was a completely turn off to hear that it was a dirty, disgusting place. But I suppose the back story made up for it.
I'm completely in love with Caelum. He's such a strong character. I'm not sure how to explain it but he's the type of guy that will love you endlessly. If the guy I love cursed me and did all the things that Celeste did, I would gain control of my "human" (not sure what you call Jenna and Eidan to Celeste and Caelum) as fast as possible and kill my curser so quick, they wouldn't know what hit them. But through everything, he's still in love with her. My heart warms to that. I'm glad that Celeste knows she's wrong and deserves everything that has come her way but I would gladly appreciate it if you gave Celeste and Caelum the happy ending they clearly deserve.
I took a look at the drawings you had of the characters and I would like to say Jenna wasn't what I expected. She's a lot more curvy and I kind of expected her to have been wearing some kind of toga. I'm sorry, I don't know what I was thinking. I had expected Eidan to be the lean but muscular type but it seems that he's more muscular than lean. I don't mind because I think they fit each other like that. I tried looking for an image of Zeph but I didn't find one so I'm quite bummed out about that.
Air is my favorite element out of all the elements so of course I would love the air kingdom. It was a completely turn off to hear that it was a dirty, disgusting place. But I suppose the back story made up for it.
I'm completely in love with Caelum. He's such a strong character. I'm not sure how to explain it but he's the type of guy that will love you endlessly. If the guy I love cursed me and did all the things that Celeste did, I would gain control of my "human" (not sure what you call Jenna and Eidan to Celeste and Caelum) as fast as possible and kill my curser so quick, they wouldn't know what hit them. But through everything, he's still in love with her. My heart warms to that. I'm glad that Celeste knows she's wrong and deserves everything that has come her way but I would gladly appreciate it if you gave Celeste and Caelum the happy ending they clearly deserve.
I took a look at the drawings you had of the characters and I would like to say Jenna wasn't what I expected. She's a lot more curvy and I kind of expected her to have been wearing some kind of toga. I'm sorry, I don't know what I was thinking. I had expected Eidan to be the lean but muscular type but it seems that he's more muscular than lean. I don't mind because I think they fit each other like that. I tried looking for an image of Zeph but I didn't find one so I'm quite bummed out about that.
8/13/2014 c17 my princess ending
Wait, I had no idea it was Grace in the italics! But now it makes more sense. I squealed when Caelum and Jenna met and he stole the kiss. I was screaming hallejuah because finally something happens between them even if it's not Eidan in control. I really do hope Caelum and Celeste sort out whatever is going on because I love Caelum and his personality.
Wait, I had no idea it was Grace in the italics! But now it makes more sense. I squealed when Caelum and Jenna met and he stole the kiss. I was screaming hallejuah because finally something happens between them even if it's not Eidan in control. I really do hope Caelum and Celeste sort out whatever is going on because I love Caelum and his personality.
8/12/2014 c14 my princess ending
NO! I would endlessly cry if Zeph ended up dead. He's become a character I adore so much because of his sense of humor and his attitude towards people.
NO! I would endlessly cry if Zeph ended up dead. He's become a character I adore so much because of his sense of humor and his attitude towards people.
8/11/2014 c54 Vanillatwist
never gonna give you up or let you down or any of that. if you want to update you still have supporters
never gonna give you up or let you down or any of that. if you want to update you still have supporters
8/3/2014 c11 my princess ending
I'm going to have no internet access for the next week and all that's going to go on through my head is Jenna, Eidan, Lucan and Caelum. I'm so excited to find out all the deep dark secrets of the past.
I'm not very fond of Lucan so this chapter is kind of dull to me. He's smart but he's too nice it's a little fake. I'm not sure, maybe his polite-ness is an add-on to his personality as a Prince. I'm sure you'll end up making his some amazing man that I will fall in love with in the end. For now, good bye!
I'm going to have no internet access for the next week and all that's going to go on through my head is Jenna, Eidan, Lucan and Caelum. I'm so excited to find out all the deep dark secrets of the past.
I'm not very fond of Lucan so this chapter is kind of dull to me. He's smart but he's too nice it's a little fake. I'm not sure, maybe his polite-ness is an add-on to his personality as a Prince. I'm sure you'll end up making his some amazing man that I will fall in love with in the end. For now, good bye!
8/2/2014 c9 my princess ending
I like Caelum. He's determined and I just feel like he deserves something. I understand his intentions so it's okay. I feel bad for him. In fact, I don't think I'd like Celeste since she betrayed him but oh well.
Also, another thing I wanted to point out, I love how it's not just kingdom but the kingdoms are elements. I love how everything they do in the kingdom revolves around that element, it just fascinates me and makes me love it more.
I like Caelum. He's determined and I just feel like he deserves something. I understand his intentions so it's okay. I feel bad for him. In fact, I don't think I'd like Celeste since she betrayed him but oh well.
Also, another thing I wanted to point out, I love how it's not just kingdom but the kingdoms are elements. I love how everything they do in the kingdom revolves around that element, it just fascinates me and makes me love it more.
8/1/2014 c7 my princess ending
I absolutely adore how organized your chapters are (the titles of the chapters, the exerpts, etc.). I really admire how you managed to find such a beautiful name for the story and your pen name is absolutely adorable!
I have a few questions about the pronunciation of a few names. Eidan is pronounced like Aidan right? And exactly how is Lucan pronounced? Hope you finish updating by the time I'm caught up!
I absolutely adore how organized your chapters are (the titles of the chapters, the exerpts, etc.). I really admire how you managed to find such a beautiful name for the story and your pen name is absolutely adorable!
I have a few questions about the pronunciation of a few names. Eidan is pronounced like Aidan right? And exactly how is Lucan pronounced? Hope you finish updating by the time I'm caught up!
8/1/2014 c2 my princess ending
I love the small exerpts in the beginning and end of chapters. I'm not sure if I should call them exerpts though. I don't think you understand how much I love them. If those words were painted on a painting, I would buy it right away. I practically worship it. Hahah, I think it's a really nice touch.
I love the small exerpts in the beginning and end of chapters. I'm not sure if I should call them exerpts though. I don't think you understand how much I love them. If those words were painted on a painting, I would buy it right away. I practically worship it. Hahah, I think it's a really nice touch.
7/31/2014 c1 my princess ending
I've been putting off reading this story since...probably the beginning of summer. I wasn't really feeling the thought of 54 long chapters. It just seemed like a huge commitment but I'm glad I finally started because the start seems to be quite interesting.
I've been putting off reading this story since...probably the beginning of summer. I wasn't really feeling the thought of 54 long chapters. It just seemed like a huge commitment but I'm glad I finally started because the start seems to be quite interesting.
6/16/2014 c1 Bambi
My heart breaks every time I check to see if you've updated and you haven't. Are you okay? I truly understand that you have a life but also, you have such talent... I really hope that even if you don't finish this here, you publish it. I would buy a million of your books.
My heart breaks every time I check to see if you've updated and you haven't. Are you okay? I truly understand that you have a life but also, you have such talent... I really hope that even if you don't finish this here, you publish it. I would buy a million of your books.