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11/4/2010 c1 167nickyO
Gentle tone, lovely images that flow together. Great job.
11/2/2010 c1 42InvisiblePerson
Aww, I love the descriptions! :D
11/1/2010 c1 The Cursed Instrument
creative
10/31/2010 c1 13Alberic of Krufton
Lovely imagery

Brings back childhood memories

Though the order's odd

Red leaves in Autumn?

I've known just brown and yellow

Must make a nice scene

A minor edit;

"Peaking" should not have an 'a'

A word with two 'e's

Spring poem, second line

Perhaps a stronger sentence?

Lots of potential =)

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