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9/18/2012 c2 4GrangerDanger333
OH MY GOSH! This is SO good! Will you post some more? Pleeease? Seriously, I am so into this story! I can't explain why but it is just really well written and I love the story idea, and the characters! Yum :D
7/21/2012 c2 5The Infinity
Um, why has this not been updated?

WHY?

You have some major explaining to do. Because in only two chapters I fell madly in love with this story.

And I need more than two chapters.

Please?

Just think about it.

Much love,
Lil' Monster
9/27/2011 c2 GingaNinja
Ooo it's all so exciting xD. You've developed the characters so well and I'm amazed to find this story kept my attention and I was totally gutted to find only two chapters written. Please continue :)
9/27/2011 c2 GingaNinja
Ooo it's all so exciting xD. You've developed the characters so well and I'm amazed to find this story kept my attention and I was totally gutted to find only two chapters written. Please continue :)
11/12/2010 c2 ellie
Love this story! Hope you'll continue. Barra and Coll are really well written characters. I agree with Barra though... I'm confused why Coll loved his master (saved him from the soldiers in the Barracks? stockholm syndrom?).
11/8/2010 c2 16Painted Desert
This story had me in tears by the end! I'm an emotional reader but I've been finding fictionpress stories quite disappointing as of late. I am so happy to have found this! Hopefully you'll continue soon! I like the characters. Coll is sweet and I always love them with a troubled past. I'm excited to see more of Barra's past, perhaps, also I think it will be interesting to see how he reacts to Coll's past. Continue soon! I will be watching for updates!
11/8/2010 c2 ava
Review!

This made me cry, which surprised me. It also made me smile. Pretty good going for one chapter! The leads are both fairly strong and I'm sure will grow too. Looking forward to your next chapter :)
11/4/2010 c1 anonymous
Oh, I really like it so far. Please continue, I can't wait to see how their relationship develops.
11/3/2010 c1 10Crystalline92
I like this ^^ It held my interest from the beginning of the chapter, and there's not reallt many that do
11/1/2010 c1 1Blind Scribe
Moar plz!
11/1/2010 c1 Illogical sslnk at hotmail com
This is so good. kepp writing I want to know more.
11/1/2010 c1 1Osoi
Omg. I love this!
10/30/2010 c1 DarkRoses
This is the best story i've read in a long time PLEASE WRITE MORE! *puppy dog eyes*
10/30/2010 c1 2S. J. Vanne
Nice start. I can't wait to read more!

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