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4GrangerDanger333
Hehe nice story. I like the story idea, and the cross-dressing, and the ending :D but you have some errors, like mis-types or whatever:
*He went of and god the best...* should be *He went off and got the best...*
And here:
*Oh, i'll show him pain.* you didn't capitalise the 'I'.
There's quite a few little spellling mistakes like that, as if you typed it up fast and didn't check it before posting. But it's not hideous to read or anything. I know I'm kind of picking the story apart a little bit, sorry, but you did say to critique :D
Hope that's all ok!
4GrangerDanger333Hehe nice story. I like the story idea, and the cross-dressing, and the ending :D but you have some errors, like mis-types or whatever:
*He went of and god the best...* should be *He went off and got the best...*
And here:
*Oh, i'll show him pain.* you didn't capitalise the 'I'.
There's quite a few little spellling mistakes like that, as if you typed it up fast and didn't check it before posting. But it's not hideous to read or anything. I know I'm kind of picking the story apart a little bit, sorry, but you did say to critique :D
Hope that's all ok!