12/16/2012 c1 5The Invisible Stalker
This is awesome! The way Millie acts, I lovedthe part when you put 'Then it happened, he talked' XD
Can't wait for next part!

11/2/2010 c1 3mightyboo1
There are some grammar mistakes and the paragraphs are short, but I really like it. Please continue the story. It will be an interesting one. ;D