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12/22/2013 c1 12SomethingCreative-V1
Soooo sad. I hate when parents do that, beat their own kids. Anyway, thank you for the advice on my story. I edited so if you can, read over it again? Thank you though, it helps me become a better writer.
12/20/2013 c1 4HighOnBrokenWings
Great work. I do feel like throughout the middle piece of the work there may have been a slight too much repetition of the one line, but nothing that ruins the overall effect of the work. I really like how you captured the sense of blame, guilt and dread, rather than just the violence of a situation like this.
10/20/2011 c1 13Dorkfishe97
This Fish did not know about your dark side 0_o I like :D
11/28/2010 c1 CrystalGW34
Sad, but very well written. Nicely done. :)
11/9/2010 c1 lymli
the imagery about the sun in the last part is cool.

great piece.

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