
3/15/2011 c5
15MidnightFox
Yay, I finally read one of your stories. It's very good and some parts are extremely funny. I was surprised when I saw that she was brutally murdered in her sleep. The only thing that was kind of weird about it was how obedient Jonas was. Like..she'd ask not to be bothered and he'd just agree to it like it was nothing even though she was obviously troubled. Very good story though :) Yay for my honest and long awaited review!

Yay, I finally read one of your stories. It's very good and some parts are extremely funny. I was surprised when I saw that she was brutally murdered in her sleep. The only thing that was kind of weird about it was how obedient Jonas was. Like..she'd ask not to be bothered and he'd just agree to it like it was nothing even though she was obviously troubled. Very good story though :) Yay for my honest and long awaited review!
1/24/2011 c5
30Mukuwa.Renu.Koi
*Screams* OMG! she was killed? do we get to find out why? wow! thats crazy! and aw I LOVE jonas! he's so hot! and when she said about likeing the way he said her name in the scotish accent i could just imagine how it sounded all scotish and hot! i loovedd this chapter! and i love Jonas! they are so cute together! :D hope you write more on them! and you should write more pirate romance your real good! :)

*Screams* OMG! she was killed? do we get to find out why? wow! thats crazy! and aw I LOVE jonas! he's so hot! and when she said about likeing the way he said her name in the scotish accent i could just imagine how it sounded all scotish and hot! i loovedd this chapter! and i love Jonas! they are so cute together! :D hope you write more on them! and you should write more pirate romance your real good! :)
12/30/2010 c5 CapablePoem759
OOH! I loved the choice thing and whole being murdered in her sleep. That was a cool twist and Maria was a great add on. Keep it up!
OOH! I loved the choice thing and whole being murdered in her sleep. That was a cool twist and Maria was a great add on. Keep it up!
12/27/2010 c5
17Lady of romance world88
Hi. Its so beautiful chapter and I love it. :) Who's Maria? :S Ah Coral is making decisions and I am wonder what decision that she is going to pick? :) Ah she pick to stay with Jonas now. Yay! :) OMG Coral is murder in her sleep in another life. No wonder Maria is so pleasant about it. Yay Coral told everything to Jonas about the decisions. :) Hurry update soon. Keep writing. :D I am look forward to read the next chapters of your story. Don't stop writing. :D I am enjoy read this story and I love it. Please update soon. :) Merry christmas and happy new year. Wish you have a great relaxing holiday. Be safe and well. Enjoy the christmas with your family and your friends. :) Take care. Have fun *hugs* mwa xo.

Hi. Its so beautiful chapter and I love it. :) Who's Maria? :S Ah Coral is making decisions and I am wonder what decision that she is going to pick? :) Ah she pick to stay with Jonas now. Yay! :) OMG Coral is murder in her sleep in another life. No wonder Maria is so pleasant about it. Yay Coral told everything to Jonas about the decisions. :) Hurry update soon. Keep writing. :D I am look forward to read the next chapters of your story. Don't stop writing. :D I am enjoy read this story and I love it. Please update soon. :) Merry christmas and happy new year. Wish you have a great relaxing holiday. Be safe and well. Enjoy the christmas with your family and your friends. :) Take care. Have fun *hugs* mwa xo.
12/27/2010 c5
1Valinta
OH this is interesting. Very interesting. Must read read read read read read some more. I also like fedoras.

OH this is interesting. Very interesting. Must read read read read read read some more. I also like fedoras.
12/27/2010 c5
43losing oxygen
Ah, wonderful! I do love it. I hope you had a wonderful Christmas, too. Anyway, keep up the amazing writing.
Smiles!

Ah, wonderful! I do love it. I hope you had a wonderful Christmas, too. Anyway, keep up the amazing writing.
Smiles!
11/29/2010 c4 except dreaming isn't enough
This is so sweet — sorry I haven't reviewed yet, I've been... er, busy. But really — this was incredible. I think I might have a cavity from all the crazy sweetness.
But yeah. Keep up the awesomeness!
xoxo.
This is so sweet — sorry I haven't reviewed yet, I've been... er, busy. But really — this was incredible. I think I might have a cavity from all the crazy sweetness.
But yeah. Keep up the awesomeness!
xoxo.
11/28/2010 c4
17Lady of romance world88
Hi. Aww so cute and sweet chapter :) I hope that Coral will stay with Captain Edwards and get know him better. :) Will Coral return her old life again or not? :S Will Coral ever met her mother again someday? I hope that Captain Edwards protect Coral and cherish her + spoil her with many things. :) What happen to Coral's father in 17th century? I hope that Coral and Captain Edwards will build love relationship and friendship. :) Hurry update soon. Keep writing. :D

Hi. Aww so cute and sweet chapter :) I hope that Coral will stay with Captain Edwards and get know him better. :) Will Coral return her old life again or not? :S Will Coral ever met her mother again someday? I hope that Captain Edwards protect Coral and cherish her + spoil her with many things. :) What happen to Coral's father in 17th century? I hope that Coral and Captain Edwards will build love relationship and friendship. :) Hurry update soon. Keep writing. :D
11/27/2010 c4 CapablePoem759
I jumped with joy, to find your story posted, but my heart filled with love as I read each word, carefully and quietly. Please continued, or else I'll be mad, for I love this story, and for that I am glad. lol I don't know why I put that little rhyme in at the end, I guess it sounded fun. lol I love this story! I really did jump with joy! PLEASE KEEP IT UP! Do you have a account on Fanfiction? I think they do that Pirates movie too. You could write a really good story for it.
I jumped with joy, to find your story posted, but my heart filled with love as I read each word, carefully and quietly. Please continued, or else I'll be mad, for I love this story, and for that I am glad. lol I don't know why I put that little rhyme in at the end, I guess it sounded fun. lol I love this story! I really did jump with joy! PLEASE KEEP IT UP! Do you have a account on Fanfiction? I think they do that Pirates movie too. You could write a really good story for it.
11/18/2010 c3 CapablePoem759
KEEP WRITING! KEEP WRITING! IF ANYTHING GOOD IN THIS WORLD! KEEP WRITING! I GOTTA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! LIKE SERIOUSLY! KEEP WRITING!
KEEP WRITING! KEEP WRITING! IF ANYTHING GOOD IN THIS WORLD! KEEP WRITING! I GOTTA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! LIKE SERIOUSLY! KEEP WRITING!
11/18/2010 c2 CapablePoem759
PERFECT! I just love how you explained him and her! How she slightly felt feelings for him, but tried as hard as she could to stay away.
PERFECT! I just love how you explained him and her! How she slightly felt feelings for him, but tried as hard as she could to stay away.