for An Introduction8/8/2011 c1 
7PetalsFromTheForest
I love how you called the cherry blossoms "pink rain". I've never heard that before-very creative way to start things off. You are really good at describing things, have you realized? Wonderful; all the images you're able to put in my head. But I found it quite amusing that you threw in the unexpected cynicism a couple times too. It was sweet at the end and the flow of the story was smooth. This kind of quiet/romantic writing from you is also something I like :D
7PetalsFromTheForestI love how you called the cherry blossoms "pink rain". I've never heard that before-very creative way to start things off. You are really good at describing things, have you realized? Wonderful; all the images you're able to put in my head. But I found it quite amusing that you threw in the unexpected cynicism a couple times too. It was sweet at the end and the flow of the story was smooth. This kind of quiet/romantic writing from you is also something I like :D
5/9/2011 c1 3Ramar
I recently read another story of yours (Diecide) and was so curious if you were truly going to leave it at that "Down Lucian, Down Lucian" chapter that I had to read another one of your stuff just to get a gist of how you usually write...and found this :) Now I feel consoled, in a way, that, hopefully, Diecide won't end that sadly and morosely :( because that'd just be so Edgar Allan Poe-ish or Mary Shelley-ish...and coz Lenalee & Luke seem to have gotten out of the Colosseum and are walking around graveyards...
Maybe you've put the status as 'Complete' as a mistake...or maybe...nevermind :) This was good =D You know, due to the end of Deicide, I actually couldn't sleep until very late into the night because I kept on wondering about it? Just saying, so that you'd know the impact your story had on me XD Very good, all in all, with some minor errors here and there.
3RamarI recently read another story of yours (Diecide) and was so curious if you were truly going to leave it at that "Down Lucian, Down Lucian" chapter that I had to read another one of your stuff just to get a gist of how you usually write...and found this :) Now I feel consoled, in a way, that, hopefully, Diecide won't end that sadly and morosely :( because that'd just be so Edgar Allan Poe-ish or Mary Shelley-ish...and coz Lenalee & Luke seem to have gotten out of the Colosseum and are walking around graveyards...
Maybe you've put the status as 'Complete' as a mistake...or maybe...nevermind :) This was good =D You know, due to the end of Deicide, I actually couldn't sleep until very late into the night because I kept on wondering about it? Just saying, so that you'd know the impact your story had on me XD Very good, all in all, with some minor errors here and there.