9/28/2011 c1 1Penelope Sweet
This is honestly and truly one of the most beautiful pieces that I have ever read. Its pointed and enchanting, moving and deep in its approach. One of the few tales in the world that makes you stop and take in every single word as though your a dying man in need of water, every drop every word better then the one before.
Im honestly not exaggerating, I loved this I really did and i applaud you greatly.
This is honestly and truly one of the most beautiful pieces that I have ever read. Its pointed and enchanting, moving and deep in its approach. One of the few tales in the world that makes you stop and take in every single word as though your a dying man in need of water, every drop every word better then the one before.
Im honestly not exaggerating, I loved this I really did and i applaud you greatly.
5/3/2011 c1 31ByYourSide
Very vivid figurative language here. You wrote an entire story describing a piano-impressive. I like the repetition of the last line. You had some really good phrases, such as "the toy children raced to" and "a mark of loss." I really understood what you were trying to get across.
Very vivid figurative language here. You wrote an entire story describing a piano-impressive. I like the repetition of the last line. You had some really good phrases, such as "the toy children raced to" and "a mark of loss." I really understood what you were trying to get across.
4/23/2011 c1 FrankieHaydn
This is gorgeous, and very creepy. I love it.
The description is chilling, and beautiful. :)
This is gorgeous, and very creepy. I love it.
The description is chilling, and beautiful. :)
11/9/2010 c1 lymli
this felt like a scene with a ghost and she was going to shows up in any moment.
it's kind of nostalgic too.
I felt sorry for the piano for being alone, XD
this felt like a scene with a ghost and she was going to shows up in any moment.
it's kind of nostalgic too.
I felt sorry for the piano for being alone, XD
11/8/2010 c1 1toastatsunset
aw :3
I can't believe this doesn't have more reviews... this is amazing. I like how you ended with the same line as the beginning. Poor piano :)
aw :3
I can't believe this doesn't have more reviews... this is amazing. I like how you ended with the same line as the beginning. Poor piano :)