for Another Day8/2/2011 c1 
7PetalsFromTheForest
I liked that this poem created images in my head. Of someone walking through "life", of a puzzle, of someone having a sudden revelation, of pretty flowers and tulips, of flying birds, and someone leaning against a tree while the grass swings in the breeze. It's a good, slightly sad, series of images. Needless to say, nice job.
7PetalsFromTheForestI liked that this poem created images in my head. Of someone walking through "life", of a puzzle, of someone having a sudden revelation, of pretty flowers and tulips, of flying birds, and someone leaning against a tree while the grass swings in the breeze. It's a good, slightly sad, series of images. Needless to say, nice job.