for Enchanted11/13/2010 c1 RDScholar
I thought it was a great start. A few things I noticed on the surface was that you didn't give a name for the principle. Also I didn't realize the story changed from a girls' point of view to a guys' until I kept reading. Other than that I'd loved to read more. :)
I thought it was a great start. A few things I noticed on the surface was that you didn't give a name for the principle. Also I didn't realize the story changed from a girls' point of view to a guys' until I kept reading. Other than that I'd loved to read more. :)