for The Journey of Love, Secrets and Guilt7/20/2012 c40 CrystalGW34
OMG I can't believe she tried to kill herself. Oh poor Meg. I hope she will get the help she needs and get better. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon. :)
OMG I can't believe she tried to kill herself. Oh poor Meg. I hope she will get the help she needs and get better. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon. :)
7/20/2012 c39 CrystalGW34
I'm glad Meg was rescued. I hope she will be fine. Can't wait to read more. Great chapter. :)
I'm glad Meg was rescued. I hope she will be fine. Can't wait to read more. Great chapter. :)
7/20/2012 c38 CrystalGW34
Great chapter. I'm off to read more. Sorry I haven't read and reviewed lately. I've been busy. Anyway, great chapter. :)
Great chapter. I'm off to read more. Sorry I haven't read and reviewed lately. I've been busy. Anyway, great chapter. :)
7/16/2012 c37 CrystalGW34
Poor Meg. John needs to find her and soon. I hope Hermione isn't kidnapped. Please update soon. Can't wait to read more of this. :)
Poor Meg. John needs to find her and soon. I hope Hermione isn't kidnapped. Please update soon. Can't wait to read more of this. :)
7/15/2012 c37 buttercup123
I just found your story, and I have to say that it is rather interesting. However, it is difficult to follow the story at times because of the grammatical mistakes and overuse of many words. Nevertheless, it has the potential of being an interesting read.
I just found your story, and I have to say that it is rather interesting. However, it is difficult to follow the story at times because of the grammatical mistakes and overuse of many words. Nevertheless, it has the potential of being an interesting read.
7/13/2012 c36 CrystalGW34
Sorry I didn't review right away. I've been busy lately. Anyway, I hope John saves Meg before something horrible happenes to her. Loved the chapter. Please update soon. :)
Sorry I didn't review right away. I've been busy lately. Anyway, I hope John saves Meg before something horrible happenes to her. Loved the chapter. Please update soon. :)
6/22/2012 c35 CrystalGW34
Oh boy this just keeps getting better. Can't wait to read more and find out what happens next. Please update soon. :)
Oh boy this just keeps getting better. Can't wait to read more and find out what happens next. Please update soon. :)
6/16/2012 c34 CrystalGW34
Best chapter yet. Full of suspense and drama. Can't wait to read more. I hope Ariel wakes from her coma and I hope Meg and John get together. Can't wait to read more. Update soon. :)
Best chapter yet. Full of suspense and drama. Can't wait to read more. I hope Ariel wakes from her coma and I hope Meg and John get together. Can't wait to read more. Update soon. :)
6/10/2012 c33 CrystalGW34
I hope Meg will talk to John soon. Great chapter. Can't wait to read more. Update again soon. :)
I hope Meg will talk to John soon. Great chapter. Can't wait to read more. Update again soon. :)
6/2/2012 c32 CrystalGW34
Sorry I didn't review sooner. I've been busy working on the next chapter for my story. Anyway, this just keeps getting better. Can't wait to read more. :)
Sorry I didn't review sooner. I've been busy working on the next chapter for my story. Anyway, this just keeps getting better. Can't wait to read more. :)
6/1/2012 c23 Confused
I like the plot of your story but am finding it really hard to follow as the grammar is shocking and most of the details are inaccurate. Such as getting a transfer from NYCPD to the Sydney Police Department is really not possible as these two departments are in no way linked, being that they are in separate countries with different legal systems. I am also finding that some of the details are superfluous, such as describing in detail what a person is wearing. Also it seems as if someone has just run spell check through the story without making sure that the words are being used in the correct context. I know it may seem like I am being rude and nit-picky but I believe that this story would be much more reader friendly if you had someone edit it more thoroughly.
I like the plot of your story but am finding it really hard to follow as the grammar is shocking and most of the details are inaccurate. Such as getting a transfer from NYCPD to the Sydney Police Department is really not possible as these two departments are in no way linked, being that they are in separate countries with different legal systems. I am also finding that some of the details are superfluous, such as describing in detail what a person is wearing. Also it seems as if someone has just run spell check through the story without making sure that the words are being used in the correct context. I know it may seem like I am being rude and nit-picky but I believe that this story would be much more reader friendly if you had someone edit it more thoroughly.
5/26/2012 c31 CrystalGW34
I wonder what John did that makes him want to get revenge. The note was creepy and I feel so bad for Ariel. Can't wait to read more. Please update again soon. :)
I wonder what John did that makes him want to get revenge. The note was creepy and I feel so bad for Ariel. Can't wait to read more. Please update again soon. :)
5/13/2012 c30 CrystalGW34
That was a long chapter. Poor Brooklyn. I hope her uncle finds Scar and kills him. I enjoyed this chapter and I can't wait to read more. Please update soon. :)
That was a long chapter. Poor Brooklyn. I hope her uncle finds Scar and kills him. I enjoyed this chapter and I can't wait to read more. Please update soon. :)
54/20/2012 c29 CrystalGW34
Good chapter. I especially liked the murder scene part. Can't wait to read more. Please update again soon. :)
Good chapter. I especially liked the murder scene part. Can't wait to read more. Please update again soon. :)