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7Novocaine for the Soul
I liked the chapter but Brooklyn sounds like a total psycho. Sneaking into his apartment like that. Hopefully he doesn't fall for her tricks. Update soon.
7Novocaine for the SoulI liked the chapter but Brooklyn sounds like a total psycho. Sneaking into his apartment like that. Hopefully he doesn't fall for her tricks. Update soon.
5/1/2011 c17 CrystalGW34
Brooklyn sounds like a crazy woman who needs help. Anyway, I enjoyed reading the chapter. Thanks for sharing this story with us. Please post again soon.
Brooklyn sounds like a crazy woman who needs help. Anyway, I enjoyed reading the chapter. Thanks for sharing this story with us. Please post again soon.
5/1/2011 c17 PJ Draft
Ahh. The song for this chapter reminds me of my childhood. Anyways, thanks again for the update!
Ahh. The song for this chapter reminds me of my childhood. Anyways, thanks again for the update!
4/25/2011 c16 39Raaawr Ima Dinosaur
Aww cuutee~! Meg and John had lunch together :)
Uh oh...I knew that something bad would happen if John has Megs notebook. Perhaps if he were to read it the truth of Hermionie will be out in the open?
Greta chapter, I can't wait to see what you have installed next! Please update soon! :D
39Raaawr Ima DinosaurAww cuutee~! Meg and John had lunch together :)
Uh oh...I knew that something bad would happen if John has Megs notebook. Perhaps if he were to read it the truth of Hermionie will be out in the open?
Greta chapter, I can't wait to see what you have installed next! Please update soon! :D
4/25/2011 c15 Raaawr Ima Dinosaur
Great chapter! wow! Davids left John a riddle of sorts. Wonder when he'll figure it all out ;) and I had a giggle at Ethan's ringtone :)
and truthfully, I go for neither of those teams. For me it's the west tigers all the way :D
Great chapter! wow! Davids left John a riddle of sorts. Wonder when he'll figure it all out ;) and I had a giggle at Ethan's ringtone :)
and truthfully, I go for neither of those teams. For me it's the west tigers all the way :D
4/25/2011 c14 Raaawr Ima Dinosaur
...all i've got to say is... wow he's loaded...well was loaded...
Great chapter! It was interesting to see what he left them :)
...all i've got to say is... wow he's loaded...well was loaded...
Great chapter! It was interesting to see what he left them :)
4/25/2011 c13 Raaawr Ima Dinosaur
Great chapter! It's good that Naomi and Gabriella are getting along so well :) I wonder what Gabriella is hiding... and it's cute to see John protective of his sister in law and unborn nephew :)
Great chapter! It's good that Naomi and Gabriella are getting along so well :) I wonder what Gabriella is hiding... and it's cute to see John protective of his sister in law and unborn nephew :)
4/23/2011 c16 7Novocaine for the Soul
Aw they're spending time together, that's great. Is the notebook her diary and that's why she's panicking? I really hope it's not because if he finds out about Hermione before Meg tells him it will be bad. Good chapter though, can't wait to read more.
7Novocaine for the SoulAw they're spending time together, that's great. Is the notebook her diary and that's why she's panicking? I really hope it's not because if he finds out about Hermione before Meg tells him it will be bad. Good chapter though, can't wait to read more.
4/21/2011 c16 5ILveJcb
Aw! What a wonderful chapter!
I cant wait to see what she has written in that notebook! I also cant wait until John finds out about Hermoine!
Oh this is serously becoming interesting!
Hurry and update soon!
5ILveJcbAw! What a wonderful chapter!
I cant wait to see what she has written in that notebook! I also cant wait until John finds out about Hermoine!
Oh this is serously becoming interesting!
Hurry and update soon!
4/21/2011 c16 CrystalGW34
I hope Meg will tell John about Hermione and soon. I enjoyed reading the new chapter. Please update again soon. I'm looking forward to reading more. :)
I hope Meg will tell John about Hermione and soon. I enjoyed reading the new chapter. Please update again soon. I'm looking forward to reading more. :)
4/21/2011 c16 PJ Draft
Poor Meg.. You update so fast by the way. I love quick updates. :D Anyways, good job. I am looking forward to the next installment soon. -PJ
Poor Meg.. You update so fast by the way. I love quick updates. :D Anyways, good job. I am looking forward to the next installment soon. -PJ
4/19/2011 c15 CrystalGW34
The dream John had has me intrigued. I can't wait to read more of this. I hope there will be a chapter soon where John and Meg meet back up. Please post soon. :)
The dream John had has me intrigued. I can't wait to read more of this. I hope there will be a chapter soon where John and Meg meet back up. Please post soon. :)
4/18/2011 c15 7Novocaine for the Soul
Wow that was a fast update. I like that David visited him in his dream, maybe he'll feel a bit better now. Also it was sweet of him to ask Ethan to look out for Meg, too bad he hasn't realized that he loves her yet.
Can't wait for more Meg and John, it should be interesting.
7Novocaine for the SoulWow that was a fast update. I like that David visited him in his dream, maybe he'll feel a bit better now. Also it was sweet of him to ask Ethan to look out for Meg, too bad he hasn't realized that he loves her yet.
Can't wait for more Meg and John, it should be interesting.
4/18/2011 c15 5ILveJcb
Oh more John and Meg will be very interesting.
Its very sweet that John cares about Meg so much he asks Ethan to take care of her while he's gone. And seeing David in his dream is quite emotional!
Amazing chapter! Keep up the great work!
5ILveJcbOh more John and Meg will be very interesting.
Its very sweet that John cares about Meg so much he asks Ethan to take care of her while he's gone. And seeing David in his dream is quite emotional!
Amazing chapter! Keep up the great work!
4/18/2011 c15 PJ Draft
You update so fast! I love that! Anyways, I do like this chapter. I like your entire story. :D As I say before, the only negitive comments are that there are a few grammar issues throughout but they are not really a problem. I wouldn't sweat over them, you read my story as well, so you know I sure as hells don't sweat over them. :) I do love this so update the next chapter when you find the time. -PJ
You update so fast! I love that! Anyways, I do like this chapter. I like your entire story. :D As I say before, the only negitive comments are that there are a few grammar issues throughout but they are not really a problem. I wouldn't sweat over them, you read my story as well, so you know I sure as hells don't sweat over them. :) I do love this so update the next chapter when you find the time. -PJ