for The Journey of Love, Secrets and Guilt2/28/2011 c11 
7Novocaine for the Soul
Yay I'm glad his mum just needed rest and it wasn't anything serious. Also it's good that he'll be closer especially if they contact Gabriella and she needs any help.
7Novocaine for the SoulYay I'm glad his mum just needed rest and it wasn't anything serious. Also it's good that he'll be closer especially if they contact Gabriella and she needs any help.
2/28/2011 c11 5ILveJcb
hi. this is a very good chapter...the flash back to the previous night was very cleverly done. I wonder when John will find out about his daughter and falls in love again? Im really happy that he wants to transfer to Sydney now...it means he's dedicated!
Upload soon! Great chapter
5ILveJcbhi. this is a very good chapter...the flash back to the previous night was very cleverly done. I wonder when John will find out about his daughter and falls in love again? Im really happy that he wants to transfer to Sydney now...it means he's dedicated!
Upload soon! Great chapter
2/27/2011 c2 5thefaultinourpatronus
Sorry for taking so long with this review! School's been hard, but I'm here now anyway (:
I liked the description of John a lot! I can't wait to read more of his character. Although I was wondering whether six foot nine might be a bit TOO tall? Just a thought (:
Also, I thought the message could be put in italics or something, just to make stuck out. Really interesting chapter, the link between this chapter and the first was well established!
Good job! (:
5thefaultinourpatronusSorry for taking so long with this review! School's been hard, but I'm here now anyway (:
I liked the description of John a lot! I can't wait to read more of his character. Although I was wondering whether six foot nine might be a bit TOO tall? Just a thought (:
Also, I thought the message could be put in italics or something, just to make stuck out. Really interesting chapter, the link between this chapter and the first was well established!
Good job! (:
2/26/2011 c11 CrystalGW34
I'm glad that John's mom is going to be okay, and I'm thrilled that he will be transfering. I'm looking forward to reading more. Nicely done. :)
I'm glad that John's mom is going to be okay, and I'm thrilled that he will be transfering. I'm looking forward to reading more. Nicely done. :)
2/25/2011 c11 39Raaawr Ima Dinosaur
Great chapter! I'm glad their mum's okay and its good that John's getting a transfer. His family need him in this time of grief.
When will Meg and Hermionie come back into the story?
Please update soon! :D
39Raaawr Ima DinosaurGreat chapter! I'm glad their mum's okay and its good that John's getting a transfer. His family need him in this time of grief.
When will Meg and Hermionie come back into the story?
Please update soon! :D
2/24/2011 c11 PJ Draft
Good chapter. I am glad that you will be updating more frequently now. ;) I cannot wait to read more wonderful stories from you soon! Congrats on finshing chapter 10! It is always a marker of success! Please update soon! -PJ
Good chapter. I am glad that you will be updating more frequently now. ;) I cannot wait to read more wonderful stories from you soon! Congrats on finshing chapter 10! It is always a marker of success! Please update soon! -PJ
2/23/2011 c10 6Autumn Blaze
I'm loving this. Apart from a couple grammar errors this is awesome! I love how you keep the storyline interesting, update soon :D
6Autumn BlazeI'm loving this. Apart from a couple grammar errors this is awesome! I love how you keep the storyline interesting, update soon :D
2/22/2011 c4 2Il0VEUsomuch
sorry if my last reviews got you mad ): i didnt mean to.. really sorry.
but anyways, this chapter was great :O
you know what i think? i think JOHN still likes her. maybe even loves her! it shows when he was looking through the pictures of her xD
i guess i have to give him up so he can have her then :(
sorry again for the last reviews i gave youu..
have a good day! (:
2Il0VEUsomuchsorry if my last reviews got you mad ): i didnt mean to.. really sorry.
but anyways, this chapter was great :O
you know what i think? i think JOHN still likes her. maybe even loves her! it shows when he was looking through the pictures of her xD
i guess i have to give him up so he can have her then :(
sorry again for the last reviews i gave youu..
have a good day! (:
2/21/2011 c3 Il0VEUsomuch
OYY! nice chapters. it was berry good (:
i just wanted to ask you if you could please put lil more descriptions? the story's getting better :D
now i will read again tomorrow. need to do homework. HOORAY!
OYY! nice chapters. it was berry good (:
i just wanted to ask you if you could please put lil more descriptions? the story's getting better :D
now i will read again tomorrow. need to do homework. HOORAY!
2/21/2011 c2 Il0VEUsomuch
SEE! WHAT DID I TELL YOU? I REVIEWED :PP
oh yes (:
pretty good chapter. just needs a little grammatical fixing and you'll be great
now time to read the next one. tryna catch up :PP
SEE! WHAT DID I TELL YOU? I REVIEWED :PP
oh yes (:
pretty good chapter. just needs a little grammatical fixing and you'll be great
now time to read the next one. tryna catch up :PP
2/20/2011 c1 5thefaultinourpatronus
Sad that his partner didn't make it. This is a great start! There are a few grammar errors, but nothing major. The action scenes were written very well, nice start!
x mandy
5thefaultinourpatronusSad that his partner didn't make it. This is a great start! There are a few grammar errors, but nothing major. The action scenes were written very well, nice start!
x mandy
2/12/2011 c10 5ILveJcb
Love it! Can't wait to read more! I'd like to know why David kept his finace a secret? Was he hiding something? It's weird.
I'd like to know more of John and Meg!
Thanks for uploading. The twin syndrome is very interesting, Isn't that when they suspect the healthy twin eats the weaker one?
Anyway! Great chapter!
5ILveJcbLove it! Can't wait to read more! I'd like to know why David kept his finace a secret? Was he hiding something? It's weird.
I'd like to know more of John and Meg!
Thanks for uploading. The twin syndrome is very interesting, Isn't that when they suspect the healthy twin eats the weaker one?
Anyway! Great chapter!
2/11/2011 c10 7Novocaine for the Soul
Whoa so much happened in this chapter. So Gabriella was having twins but vanishing twin syndrome occurred and her twin is also missing? Interesting coincidence.
I hope the surprise visit is John visiting Meg and maybe seeing Hermione.
Oh and thanks for telling me about you changing your name, I was confused for a minute, but that cleared it up.
7Novocaine for the SoulWhoa so much happened in this chapter. So Gabriella was having twins but vanishing twin syndrome occurred and her twin is also missing? Interesting coincidence.
I hope the surprise visit is John visiting Meg and maybe seeing Hermione.
Oh and thanks for telling me about you changing your name, I was confused for a minute, but that cleared it up.
2/11/2011 c10 CrystalGW34
Thanks for explaining about Endometriosis and twin syndrome. Now I don't have to look them up. Well now everyone knows about Gabriella and that she's pregnant. I hope they will meet with her soon. I'm looking forward to reading more. Please post again just as soon as you can. I enjoyed the new chapter. :)
Thanks for explaining about Endometriosis and twin syndrome. Now I don't have to look them up. Well now everyone knows about Gabriella and that she's pregnant. I hope they will meet with her soon. I'm looking forward to reading more. Please post again just as soon as you can. I enjoyed the new chapter. :)
2/11/2011 c10 PJ Draft
So happy you finally updated. This chapter was good, however I still want to read more. :) No comments! Simply, I love and want to read more. As for the title issue, I like it the way it is. Updated soon!
So happy you finally updated. This chapter was good, however I still want to read more. :) No comments! Simply, I love and want to read more. As for the title issue, I like it the way it is. Updated soon!