for The Journey of Love, Secrets and Guilt2/11/2011 c10 
39Raaawr Ima Dinosaur
Wow! lots happened in this chapter. Gabrielle has a dysfunctional family? how sad and that twin syndrome is interesting. I've never heard of it before:( I wonder when they'll meet Gabrielle...maybe she's the suprise visitor? and oh no! their mum fainted :(
and When will John find out that Hermionie is his child?
Amazing chapter, i was so excited when thi popped up :D
and so is this going to be a whole series? I hope so, that'll be awesome :D
Please update soon! :D
39Raaawr Ima DinosaurWow! lots happened in this chapter. Gabrielle has a dysfunctional family? how sad and that twin syndrome is interesting. I've never heard of it before:( I wonder when they'll meet Gabrielle...maybe she's the suprise visitor? and oh no! their mum fainted :(
and When will John find out that Hermionie is his child?
Amazing chapter, i was so excited when thi popped up :D
and so is this going to be a whole series? I hope so, that'll be awesome :D
Please update soon! :D
1/15/2011 c9 5ILveJcb
This chapter is amazing! I really really like it! I loved the flashback; it was really nice. I want them to gettogether soon! I was so glad that he asked her out for coffee! It's really cute!
I hope you upload really soon! Cant wait to know abaout their date!
Good job!
5ILveJcbThis chapter is amazing! I really really like it! I loved the flashback; it was really nice. I want them to gettogether soon! I was so glad that he asked her out for coffee! It's really cute!
I hope you upload really soon! Cant wait to know abaout their date!
Good job!
1/13/2011 c9 PJ Draft
I just finished reading chapters 1-9. Wonderful story so far. Too bad you won't be updating for awhile, but I understand. Life sometimes interferes with the pursuit of our passions. I'm glad I checked out your profile when you reviewed my story. (thanks by the way for that!) This was a good read and I really like up. Can't wait for your next update!
I just finished reading chapters 1-9. Wonderful story so far. Too bad you won't be updating for awhile, but I understand. Life sometimes interferes with the pursuit of our passions. I'm glad I checked out your profile when you reviewed my story. (thanks by the way for that!) This was a good read and I really like up. Can't wait for your next update!
1/11/2011 c9 CrystalGW34
My favorite part was the flashback. It was sweet of John to come to her rescue. I'm glad Meg dropped by with the basket. I was wondering when she and John would see each other again. Anyway, I can't wait until the 13th of Feb to read the next chapter. Nicely done. :)
My favorite part was the flashback. It was sweet of John to come to her rescue. I'm glad Meg dropped by with the basket. I was wondering when she and John would see each other again. Anyway, I can't wait until the 13th of Feb to read the next chapter. Nicely done. :)
1/10/2011 c9 39Raaawr Ima Dinosaur
Great chapter, it's good to get some insite in Meg and John's relationship in high school :)
aww she just has to tell John that Hermione is his daughter!
please update as soon as you can and have fun with the move! :)
39Raaawr Ima DinosaurGreat chapter, it's good to get some insite in Meg and John's relationship in high school :)
aww she just has to tell John that Hermione is his daughter!
please update as soon as you can and have fun with the move! :)
1/9/2011 c8 Raaawr Ima Dinosaur
Poor Gabriella! :(
and Uh oh...Sarah's suspisious...
great chapter! I loved every bit of it!
please update soon! :)
Poor Gabriella! :(
and Uh oh...Sarah's suspisious...
great chapter! I loved every bit of it!
please update soon! :)
1/9/2011 c8 7Novocaine for the Soul
So David didn't tell anyone about his fiancee and now she's pregnant and alone that's really sad.
Can't wait for John to see Hermione. I hope that Meg doesn't see him with Gabriella and get the wrong idea though.
7Novocaine for the SoulSo David didn't tell anyone about his fiancee and now she's pregnant and alone that's really sad.
Can't wait for John to see Hermione. I hope that Meg doesn't see him with Gabriella and get the wrong idea though.
1/6/2011 c8 5ILveJcb
I was reading your story at nearly midnight on a weekday when I have school tomorrow! But at least im feeling better now and hopefully will carry on this way!
The chapters are very interesting. I feel bad for Gabriella, poor her. I cant wait for Meg to tell John. That chapter will be amazing!
Update soon!
5ILveJcbI was reading your story at nearly midnight on a weekday when I have school tomorrow! But at least im feeling better now and hopefully will carry on this way!
The chapters are very interesting. I feel bad for Gabriella, poor her. I cant wait for Meg to tell John. That chapter will be amazing!
Update soon!
1/2/2011 c8 CrystalGW34
So Gabriella is pregnant. So sad that the baby will never know its father. Like always, I enjoyed reading this chapter. Please update soon, but no pressure. Nicely done. :)
So Gabriella is pregnant. So sad that the baby will never know its father. Like always, I enjoyed reading this chapter. Please update soon, but no pressure. Nicely done. :)
12/30/2010 c7 Sodnekdnskhjb
Hm... so David had a fiancee... and kept it a secret? I wonder why. Keep writing!
-CC
Hm... so David had a fiancee... and kept it a secret? I wonder why. Keep writing!
-CC
12/27/2010 c7 CrystalGW34
So David had a fiancée and didn't tell anyone. How interesting. I'm looking forward to the reading of the will and meeting this Gabriella Aldo. I enjoyed reading the chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next. :)
So David had a fiancée and didn't tell anyone. How interesting. I'm looking forward to the reading of the will and meeting this Gabriella Aldo. I enjoyed reading the chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next. :)
12/26/2010 c7 39Raaawr Ima Dinosaur
Woah, he has a fiancée? I so didn't expect that. Makes you wonder what else he had been hiding.
Amazingg chapter, can't wait till the update ^^
39Raaawr Ima DinosaurWoah, he has a fiancée? I so didn't expect that. Makes you wonder what else he had been hiding.
Amazingg chapter, can't wait till the update ^^
12/25/2010 c6 7Novocaine for the Soul
That was sad. David's secret hmm I wonder what it could be?
I should add a story alert but I like to read more than one chapter at once, so I'll just keep checking. Anyway good chapter and Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you too. :)
7Novocaine for the SoulThat was sad. David's secret hmm I wonder what it could be?
I should add a story alert but I like to read more than one chapter at once, so I'll just keep checking. Anyway good chapter and Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you too. :)
12/25/2010 c5 Novocaine for the Soul
So John is her father, it will be interesting to see his reaction when he finds out.
It was a good chapter but the dinner scene was a little confusing. That might have been because of all the characters.
So John is her father, it will be interesting to see his reaction when he finds out.
It was a good chapter but the dinner scene was a little confusing. That might have been because of all the characters.