for Not A Stranger After All11/21/2010 c1 sdwinfreak
I'm thinking a big HELL YEAH on the question of continuing. Great start... love the surprise. = )
I'm thinking a big HELL YEAH on the question of continuing. Great start... love the surprise. = )
11/21/2010 c1 
4soniabonia786
funny story, i like it : D
it'd be awesome if there was another chapter to this with them actually doing it, nonvirtual hehe
loved the story
4soniabonia786funny story, i like it : D
it'd be awesome if there was another chapter to this with them actually doing it, nonvirtual hehe
loved the story
11/20/2010 c1 6mindreader311
ha ha ha ha you should so continue this! Its so funny and sexy! CONTINUE PLEASE!
6mindreader311ha ha ha ha you should so continue this! Its so funny and sexy! CONTINUE PLEASE!
11/18/2010 c1 1WhiteTigerXOXO
omg, u MUST continue! please :) it sounds lik it'd deff b a start to a great story! nd u seem like a great writer! go for it!
1WhiteTigerXOXOomg, u MUST continue! please :) it sounds lik it'd deff b a start to a great story! nd u seem like a great writer! go for it!
11/16/2010 c1 3Green Amethyst
Whoa!
I've always wanted to write a story like this (brother x sister) but never had the nerve...this is a great start, I can't wait to see what happens!
I would think you'd wait a bit longer to reveal who each other is, like maybe after a few chapters? But it's still great and I'm definitely waiting for the next chapter :)
-Amethyst G
3Green AmethystWhoa!
I've always wanted to write a story like this (brother x sister) but never had the nerve...this is a great start, I can't wait to see what happens!
I would think you'd wait a bit longer to reveal who each other is, like maybe after a few chapters? But it's still great and I'm definitely waiting for the next chapter :)
-Amethyst G