for Idioglossia1/2/2011 c1 
23fatbird33
a very intruiging poem (especially the title). the only CC i have is that the word "hubbub" didn't really seem to fit with the rest of the poem.
23fatbird33a very intruiging poem (especially the title). the only CC i have is that the word "hubbub" didn't really seem to fit with the rest of the poem.
11/22/2010 c1 Punslinger
"candid morning eyes" is a lovely phrase-you must wake up more clearheaded then I do. This is a grippng account of how we try to escape being alone in the loneliness of crowds.
"candid morning eyes" is a lovely phrase-you must wake up more clearheaded then I do. This is a grippng account of how we try to escape being alone in the loneliness of crowds.
11/21/2010 c1 13Vegetarian Meatballs
The descriptive language used was excellent. I liked the end bit the best. You demonstrate obvious skill. Nice work and thanks for sharing.
13Vegetarian MeatballsThe descriptive language used was excellent. I liked the end bit the best. You demonstrate obvious skill. Nice work and thanks for sharing.
11/21/2010 c1 47this requires thought
i liked the bit about our own private language and the words we don't have. good.
47this requires thoughti liked the bit about our own private language and the words we don't have. good.