
12/27/2010 c1
60rippling iris
how very... victorian. it was entertaining, and had a great tone (i can just hear this posh bumbling chauvinistic old man babbling on). i just couldn't keep track of what he was talking about ah well, it was a good read anyway =)

how very... victorian. it was entertaining, and had a great tone (i can just hear this posh bumbling chauvinistic old man babbling on). i just couldn't keep track of what he was talking about ah well, it was a good read anyway =)
11/22/2010 c1 Punslinger
Shakespeare's influence is evident in the story's content, if not its form-a strong stream of consciousness. Although it seems just random rambling, there's method in your madness. Well done.
Shakespeare's influence is evident in the story's content, if not its form-a strong stream of consciousness. Although it seems just random rambling, there's method in your madness. Well done.