for Existence is a Riddle11/21/2010 c1 
78Insanity Streak
This poem is an interesting read. When I read the first couple of lines, I thought the contradictions where going to take away the essence from the poem but it works.
The rhyming wasn't bad either and it is consistent which is good, though at first I thought it was out of wack but after a second read I finally got it. The title is very fitting for the poem.
Also, I just want to say that in the eighth line the way the words are arranged, it just doesn't sound right. Perhaps you could change it to "To keep a divided hear whole"- This sounds much more correct than what you have it at now.
78Insanity StreakThis poem is an interesting read. When I read the first couple of lines, I thought the contradictions where going to take away the essence from the poem but it works.
The rhyming wasn't bad either and it is consistent which is good, though at first I thought it was out of wack but after a second read I finally got it. The title is very fitting for the poem.
Also, I just want to say that in the eighth line the way the words are arranged, it just doesn't sound right. Perhaps you could change it to "To keep a divided hear whole"- This sounds much more correct than what you have it at now.