for Saving Smiles7/9/2013 c40 
2SkyBlue1309
Lol absolutely loved this story. 2 me it was a mix of Oliver queen as the green arrow in smallvile with Lois lane and batman of course! Lol but I absolutely loved it n Andies attitude n Christian! Eeeekkkkkkkkamazing! Very talented writer
2SkyBlue1309Lol absolutely loved this story. 2 me it was a mix of Oliver queen as the green arrow in smallvile with Lois lane and batman of course! Lol but I absolutely loved it n Andies attitude n Christian! Eeeekkkkkkkkamazing! Very talented writer
6/10/2013 c17 Guest
I love that little bit with William!
I love that little bit with William!
4/25/2013 c34 ant0006
Is it wrong that I squealed at the part where the Enigma comes in? Ah well, I read Fatal Attraction first, which was the man purpose of reading this story, which is really good by the way. Thumbs up!
Is it wrong that I squealed at the part where the Enigma comes in? Ah well, I read Fatal Attraction first, which was the man purpose of reading this story, which is really good by the way. Thumbs up!
12/19/2012 c41 3HalfwayParanoid
This was very good. I love it. It's kind of like Batman in a way. You did beautifully on your writing that I was drawn in from the very first sentence of the first chapter. (That is good writing to me.) Loved your work.
3HalfwayParanoidThis was very good. I love it. It's kind of like Batman in a way. You did beautifully on your writing that I was drawn in from the very first sentence of the first chapter. (That is good writing to me.) Loved your work.
10/11/2012 c41 missyb1988
The love story between Andie and Christian I loved but the superhero thing kinda killed it for me but each to there own was still a good read :)
The love story between Andie and Christian I loved but the superhero thing kinda killed it for me but each to there own was still a good read :)
9/11/2012 c40 CharlieJuliet
Wow! I really love this story.
I like it that Christian is a masked vigilante but you don't write about that side of his life unless Andie is directly involved in it. I also like how you wrote the epilogue.
Thanks!
Wow! I really love this story.
I like it that Christian is a masked vigilante but you don't write about that side of his life unless Andie is directly involved in it. I also like how you wrote the epilogue.
Thanks!
8/4/2012 c40 Robin
I Loved this story a few years back.
And I still do!
I Loved this story a few years back.
And I still do!
8/4/2012 c20 Robin
And you know what?
And you know what?
8/4/2012 c1 Robin
I remember reading this before!
I remember reading this before!
7/25/2012 c11 MadeToPlay
The quote so should have been"So… I hear you met Andie when you were her teacher in high school. Do have a thing for fourteen year olds, or was she just special?"
The quote so should have been"So… I hear you met Andie when you were her teacher in high school. Do have a thing for fourteen year olds, or was she just special?"
7/18/2012 c3 Guest
This story is similar to 50 shades of Grey... It is bad to plagiarize!
This story is similar to 50 shades of Grey... It is bad to plagiarize!
6/12/2012 c41 ellieo
Dear Lady Femme Fatale :)
I really enjoyed reading Saving Smiles! Thanks for sharing your work with us -.
I liked the characters and their chemistry together. Not sure how the whole enigma/shadow and Onyx worked in-since it was very similar to scenes from The Dark Knight; was this meant to be a partial fanfic? I think you could explore this story in two ways- either go more into the whole superhero phase and get Andie more involved earlier on; or even consider removing it altogether as it doesn't contribute a great deal to the relationship of the story.
Just a suggestion. :)
Dear Lady Femme Fatale :)
I really enjoyed reading Saving Smiles! Thanks for sharing your work with us -.
I liked the characters and their chemistry together. Not sure how the whole enigma/shadow and Onyx worked in-since it was very similar to scenes from The Dark Knight; was this meant to be a partial fanfic? I think you could explore this story in two ways- either go more into the whole superhero phase and get Andie more involved earlier on; or even consider removing it altogether as it doesn't contribute a great deal to the relationship of the story.
Just a suggestion. :)
6/8/2012 c40 JustMe
Love love love this story! Christian is perfect (maybe a little too perfect? O.o) and Andie is hilarious!
I have some unanswered questions. What happened with Renita and Jess? And why did Andie stop talking to her?
I like to think they ended up with more than 4 children! :') I know, crazy but it fits them.
Thanks for the brilliantly well-written story with great grammar! Huzzah! 3
Love love love this story! Christian is perfect (maybe a little too perfect? O.o) and Andie is hilarious!
I have some unanswered questions. What happened with Renita and Jess? And why did Andie stop talking to her?
I like to think they ended up with more than 4 children! :') I know, crazy but it fits them.
Thanks for the brilliantly well-written story with great grammar! Huzzah! 3