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6/4/2011 c5 871no.peace.los.angeles
Beautiful. :) Rain does invade your senses, doesn't it?
6/4/2011 c4 no.peace.los.angeles
LOL, I love your author's note. But this is fun. Almond eyes, I like that. And the convo seems kinda odd to me, but I don't do any drugs, so I have no idea how those convos go. Haha.
6/4/2011 c3 no.peace.los.angeles
Love the idea of being a "clear thought together." Fabulous. Keep writing! :)
4/30/2011 c2 no.peace.los.angeles
Ah, when you say he's a Pisces, it all makes sense. Pisces are dreamers, full of wonder. And you're a poet, so you would be attracted to him. Love the "bright clean light." Lovely. Keep writing! :)
4/21/2011 c22 90metal butterfly
I give you time, but I must say

it's better than anything

I've written passionate or not
3/2/2011 c2 48obliviation
i enjoy the fact that you added his astrological sign to the end of this, reminds me of something my best friend would do.
2/13/2011 c17 90metal butterfly
I can relate to this particular chapter.
1/25/2011 c7 in the city of neon and chrome
"matches, and muscles"

favorite line.
1/25/2011 c2 in the city of neon and chrome
i love how you wrote this-

like you're watching it from afar;

barely giving any hint of the emotion behind it.
12/6/2010 c13 31drink me pretty
do you know what i love about this collection?

each entry is a spiritual journey on its own;

a glimpse of soul and universe that i had previously

thought lost unto myself that is suddenly accessible

by your words.

all connected by the greatest force of them all:

unquenchable love.

yeah, never stop writing.
12/4/2010 c1 871no.peace.los.angeles
Even the same person is different from poem to poem. Keep writing! :)
11/30/2010 c6 31drink me pretty
beautiful phrases,

profound symbolism.

if only i could find the pearls

hiding deep beneath the oceans

of my own mind the way you seem

to have found yours-
11/27/2010 c3 someone somewhere
"let's be a clear thought together"

the very implication of this statement,

the profundity, and romanticism-

oh, it makes me believe in the fantastical again.

you need to start writing more frequently.
11/27/2010 c1 5i think that maybe
i could just about jizz in my pants (metaphorically. but not physcially :D)

ugh i'm just... i'm so happy and excited you're posting again.

makes me want to find a notebook.

poetic symbiosis? (your word).

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