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1/19/2011 c2 Blackers
I feel like i Have no idea of the main charictor's intent nor thoughts. I'm also wondering what he's been doing or seeing in the time-gap you left.
1/9/2011 c2 Artism
Nice story. Usely I don't review to Many people (paranoid). But I had to give you some support. If you ever need some info on dragons I can help. Well I hope you have a good day.
12/19/2010 c1 Blackers
Ok,so far I like the story but this is only the first chapter. If your looking for advice, have at least a general idea for where the your main charactor is going to end up in the end. Otherwise the plot can turn to mush or swiss cheese real quick.

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