for Moirae1/8/2011 c1 
5Maria Gracia
Addy... all that comes to mind right now is wow.
The story was very beautiful as was the writing. You have a way with imagery that I can just transport myself into your story & really see things. The allusions to the sky, nature and the green of his eyes - they were beautiful & I enjoyed them a lot.
The way this is told; past & present was very interesting. The parts ended very nicely & the transitions felt very, very smooth.
The use of Aisa startled me, because I think of her more as Atropos. Though both names work. I was actually writing about them - the Moirae - earlier, so I thought it was funny & sweet that I found this & read. I like the idea of immortality & how you loose the beauty & just decay. Usually you hear of gods & goddesses with infinite beauty that beats the ones of mortals (well, except you know who ;b), so this was refreshing.
& then ending was lovely & sweet & the perfect closure for it. I think of the Moirae as vicious for some reason, so it was very nice to see a sensible side.
Thank you so much for posting this, I enjoyed it tremendously.
-MaGa
5Maria GraciaAddy... all that comes to mind right now is wow.
The story was very beautiful as was the writing. You have a way with imagery that I can just transport myself into your story & really see things. The allusions to the sky, nature and the green of his eyes - they were beautiful & I enjoyed them a lot.
The way this is told; past & present was very interesting. The parts ended very nicely & the transitions felt very, very smooth.
The use of Aisa startled me, because I think of her more as Atropos. Though both names work. I was actually writing about them - the Moirae - earlier, so I thought it was funny & sweet that I found this & read. I like the idea of immortality & how you loose the beauty & just decay. Usually you hear of gods & goddesses with infinite beauty that beats the ones of mortals (well, except you know who ;b), so this was refreshing.
& then ending was lovely & sweet & the perfect closure for it. I think of the Moirae as vicious for some reason, so it was very nice to see a sensible side.
Thank you so much for posting this, I enjoyed it tremendously.
-MaGa
11/30/2010 c1 1Deva Jasheway
Great story! Very well written, striking imagery. I've seen the god-mortal love affair thing before, but that doesn't mean this story isn't original. It definitely is. Good job. I'd love to read some more of your writing.
1Deva JashewayGreat story! Very well written, striking imagery. I've seen the god-mortal love affair thing before, but that doesn't mean this story isn't original. It definitely is. Good job. I'd love to read some more of your writing.