12/1/2010 c2 sandcastlesinthesand
you're the saddest bunch i ever met

but you can bet before we're through

mister i'll make a man out of you

tranquil as a forest

but on fire within

once you find your center

you are sure to win

you're a spineless, pale, pathetic lot

and you haven't got a clue

somehow i'll make a man out of you

i'm never gonna catch my breath

say goodbye to those who knew me

boy was i a fool in school for cutting gym

this guy's got 'em scared to death

hope he doesn't see right through me

now i really wish that i knew how to swim

be a man

we must be swift as the coursing river

be a man

with all the force of a great typhoon

be a man

with all the strength of a raging fire

mysterious as the dark side of the mon

TIME IS RACING TOWARDS US

TIL THE HUNS

ARRIVE

HEED MY EVERY ORDER

AND YOU MIGHT SURVIVE

YOU'RE UNSUITED FOR THE RAGE OF WAR

SO PACK UP, GO HOME, YOU'RE THROUGH

HOW COULD I MAKE A MAN OUT OF YOU?

(repeat be a man)

but yeah this was awesome. :)

loved it.

can't wait to read more!

11/30/2010 c1 brownchristine8
XD Amy frightens me.

11/29/2010 c1 sappyromancelvr
Jus by reading the summary, I knew this would be good :) very unique plot. Haha. Can't wait for the next chapter!

11/29/2010 c1 1noriepie
hey thanks for uploading, i needed a break from work.

Anyways i didn't understand the last few dialogues.

Well, this is new." Kale spoke in a flat tone. "Aren't we a bit one the new side to have addiction problems?"

Eric glanced nervously at the newcomers. "I guess I know what's going to be in the tabloids tomorrow."

The four exchanged awkward looks. Things were just going swimmingly.

Aren't we a bit one on the new side...i couldn't figure out what it means, sorry.

:) i have to remember the sun series again.

11/29/2010 c1 Pumkin33
ARGH! I have been waiting for you to do a new story :) It's really great, can't wait to see where it goes x