
3/11/2014 c37 DAMN
This was... amazing. Thank you.
This was... amazing. Thank you.
2/17/2014 c22
4carifoo2001
I've been to the St. Louis Zoo. St. Louis is only about three hours away from where I live.

I've been to the St. Louis Zoo. St. Louis is only about three hours away from where I live.
2/8/2014 c11 CakeAndUnicorn
Does it make me a bad person if I say that I laughed when Nikita got hit by a car?
Does it make me a bad person if I say that I laughed when Nikita got hit by a car?
1/29/2014 c37
1kanary98
Aw I really loved this story. I haven't been able to stop reading it! I think between everything I've been reading it for three days and it was fantastic!

Aw I really loved this story. I haven't been able to stop reading it! I think between everything I've been reading it for three days and it was fantastic!
1/26/2014 c37 ScarredWolf
That was such a ...sad? Story. I wasn't really happy with the story after the fight, but that's my own hopeless romantic opinion xP I kind of felt like it wasn't as full and in depth as the previous chapters, and maybe it went too fast? It would be totally awesome if you did write an epilogue, maybe a wedding scene or after that scene. I know you don't plan on it T.T Btw, is Nikita Japanese? I kept feeling like his name was Japanese, but his personality was way different in my perspective. I have nothing against Japan...
That was such a ...sad? Story. I wasn't really happy with the story after the fight, but that's my own hopeless romantic opinion xP I kind of felt like it wasn't as full and in depth as the previous chapters, and maybe it went too fast? It would be totally awesome if you did write an epilogue, maybe a wedding scene or after that scene. I know you don't plan on it T.T Btw, is Nikita Japanese? I kept feeling like his name was Japanese, but his personality was way different in my perspective. I have nothing against Japan...
1/11/2014 c36 jerrellsgirl112606
This story was amazing I just loved it! I can't wate to reed all the bitter songs I'll bet its just as amazing. Keep up the amazing job and post more stories!
This story was amazing I just loved it! I can't wate to reed all the bitter songs I'll bet its just as amazing. Keep up the amazing job and post more stories!
11/25/2013 c37 Guest
Did you hear that? No, well that was the sound of my heart breaking.
Did you hear that? No, well that was the sound of my heart breaking.
11/21/2013 c36 someone
YOU ARE AWESOME.
YOU ARE AWESOME.
11/14/2013 c36
2Classychik
I know this review is completely late. But I really wanted to let you know that I truly admire your work but disappointed with the story. My disappointment has nothing to do with your writing, I'm just a sucker for the sappy happily ever after stories on here. Let me tell you, I am the poster girl for Hopeless Romantic! So I just knew you were going to bring back Nik and Amy at the end of the story, because surely we didn't get enough game time between the two of them in this whole story. But when you gave us this ambiguous ending I was so disappointed and heart broken. Please don't take my disappointment the wrong way. You just completely threw me for a loop with the non-cliche ending and story.
Your writing is fantastic though. I'm in love with your style, I wish I could get my writing to be as fluid and non repetitive as yours. I absolutely love, love, love your imagery and the diction that you use through this piece. Your writing is truly like a breathe of fresh air and I hope to see some published work from you in the future.
Keep up the good work!

I know this review is completely late. But I really wanted to let you know that I truly admire your work but disappointed with the story. My disappointment has nothing to do with your writing, I'm just a sucker for the sappy happily ever after stories on here. Let me tell you, I am the poster girl for Hopeless Romantic! So I just knew you were going to bring back Nik and Amy at the end of the story, because surely we didn't get enough game time between the two of them in this whole story. But when you gave us this ambiguous ending I was so disappointed and heart broken. Please don't take my disappointment the wrong way. You just completely threw me for a loop with the non-cliche ending and story.
Your writing is fantastic though. I'm in love with your style, I wish I could get my writing to be as fluid and non repetitive as yours. I absolutely love, love, love your imagery and the diction that you use through this piece. Your writing is truly like a breathe of fresh air and I hope to see some published work from you in the future.
Keep up the good work!
11/13/2013 c23 indeed
Your story is beautiful.
You have masterfully woven depth into your story without ruining the speed of the plot.
The characters seem like people I'd genuinely be interested in knowing, and what may be best, is that it's not the standard cliche all over again.
I love the purity of your story. The man loving the woman because of her deepest thoughts, not because of a physical attraction, as well as genuinely respecting her. The woman wanting marital love, and being someone I really like.
This story feels like you respect your readers, and try giving them something real.
Your story is beautiful.
You have masterfully woven depth into your story without ruining the speed of the plot.
The characters seem like people I'd genuinely be interested in knowing, and what may be best, is that it's not the standard cliche all over again.
I love the purity of your story. The man loving the woman because of her deepest thoughts, not because of a physical attraction, as well as genuinely respecting her. The woman wanting marital love, and being someone I really like.
This story feels like you respect your readers, and try giving them something real.
10/29/2013 c36 Mikarru
A great story. It kept me reading to the very last page (with college/food breaks). You have a great talent. Looking forward to more work from you.
May
A great story. It kept me reading to the very last page (with college/food breaks). You have a great talent. Looking forward to more work from you.
May
10/25/2013 c36
16Aretice N. Treader
I liked this ending. It gives some sense of closure, but not to its full extent. It leaves the door open just enough to let the reader's imagination take over, even though you're going to write spinoffs. Amy seemed to develop extremely well throughout the story. You're a very good author.

I liked this ending. It gives some sense of closure, but not to its full extent. It leaves the door open just enough to let the reader's imagination take over, even though you're going to write spinoffs. Amy seemed to develop extremely well throughout the story. You're a very good author.