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1Chaos Etna
Okay~~~ I'm back. I'm sorry I haven't been able to review, school wouldn't permit me to get online and read works filled with love and talent. 3
So, six and seven. In six, as for grammar... I think there are only mild errors... I think. But over all, it's an informative chapter and it gives us readers a basic view of the characters thoughts, most notably Samantha's(cause duh, most of it was in her POV).
As for chapter seven, though it was understandably disappointingly short, it is actually a nice cliffhanger chapter, what with Joey's constant taunts and suggestive remarks/actions. And really... I wanna read/see how assertive Joey can really be. :3 ~~~ Loves on you, Chaos xD More chappies and... be careful not to instantly make attraction bloom... maybe in the next five chapters or something. xD I'm just suggesting though. O v 0
1Chaos EtnaOkay~~~ I'm back. I'm sorry I haven't been able to review, school wouldn't permit me to get online and read works filled with love and talent. 3
So, six and seven. In six, as for grammar... I think there are only mild errors... I think. But over all, it's an informative chapter and it gives us readers a basic view of the characters thoughts, most notably Samantha's(cause duh, most of it was in her POV).
As for chapter seven, though it was understandably disappointingly short, it is actually a nice cliffhanger chapter, what with Joey's constant taunts and suggestive remarks/actions. And really... I wanna read/see how assertive Joey can really be. :3 ~~~ Loves on you, Chaos xD More chappies and... be careful not to instantly make attraction bloom... maybe in the next five chapters or something. xD I'm just suggesting though. O v 0
8/5/2011 c7 16elizabeth-margaret
Hi, this is an interesting sotry and very entertaining- I hope you add some new chapters soon! ^_^
16elizabeth-margaretHi, this is an interesting sotry and very entertaining- I hope you add some new chapters soon! ^_^
8/5/2011 c7 8YoungSongtress
I think Joseph and Samantha are going to hit it off within the next four chapters. Can't wait to see what happens.
8YoungSongtressI think Joseph and Samantha are going to hit it off within the next four chapters. Can't wait to see what happens.
6/23/2011 c2 1Chaos Etna
Also, I have an issue with your POV's. I get confused when one minute I see third person and suddenly it switches to Samantha's first person. Can you please stick to one POV or if you're going to switch POV's make use of an indicator to avoid confusion? That's all really. It's a good story, refreshing because it isn't the cliche it looks to be and well fleshed-out character's with realistic lives. [[This is a cont for my review on chapter 5.]]
1Chaos EtnaAlso, I have an issue with your POV's. I get confused when one minute I see third person and suddenly it switches to Samantha's first person. Can you please stick to one POV or if you're going to switch POV's make use of an indicator to avoid confusion? That's all really. It's a good story, refreshing because it isn't the cliche it looks to be and well fleshed-out character's with realistic lives. [[This is a cont for my review on chapter 5.]]
6/23/2011 c5 Chaos Etna
I'm so sorry for taking long on that review. The first two chapters had me sighing, thinking that this was a cliche, why waste my time. But when I decided to give it a chance... Well, you had my socks stuck to my head. The way you had stated the pasts of both the characters and the environments they grew up in and are currently in, brilliant. Frankly, I WANT to know more about Samantha's past and heck I want to see their respective reactions to each other's pasts. They're so REAL now an I want to see more situations that make them real and human unlike most titles that repel me so. There. Keep it up!
I'm so sorry for taking long on that review. The first two chapters had me sighing, thinking that this was a cliche, why waste my time. But when I decided to give it a chance... Well, you had my socks stuck to my head. The way you had stated the pasts of both the characters and the environments they grew up in and are currently in, brilliant. Frankly, I WANT to know more about Samantha's past and heck I want to see their respective reactions to each other's pasts. They're so REAL now an I want to see more situations that make them real and human unlike most titles that repel me so. There. Keep it up!
6/21/2011 c5 Snaps4You
Thank you for updating! This is a great story that is pleasantly unique from most of the cliche stories that I have found. You have taken a cliche story topic to a whole new level which is very refreshing. I love how you have developed your characters making them have more depth and resulting in them becoming more realistic. So keep up the good work!
Thank you for updating! This is a great story that is pleasantly unique from most of the cliche stories that I have found. You have taken a cliche story topic to a whole new level which is very refreshing. I love how you have developed your characters making them have more depth and resulting in them becoming more realistic. So keep up the good work!
6/20/2011 c5 4Abbagrl
I loved getting to know them. Good job, and update soon. (Loved the longer length)
4AbbagrlI loved getting to know them. Good job, and update soon. (Loved the longer length)
6/6/2011 c3 SayWhatYouLike
As much as I liked Sam's tone, the story is cliche, the character types recycled. I really like your writing style, so I hope that maybe you can take this story a level above the norm or switch things up a little. After your hiatus of course.
As much as I liked Sam's tone, the story is cliche, the character types recycled. I really like your writing style, so I hope that maybe you can take this story a level above the norm or switch things up a little. After your hiatus of course.