
1/8/2013 c13
2Lauren Stargazer
I just wanted to stop by and say that I really like this story. I know it's been awhile since you last updated, but I'm still eagerly waiting for more. Keep up the great work!

I just wanted to stop by and say that I really like this story. I know it's been awhile since you last updated, but I'm still eagerly waiting for more. Keep up the great work!
3/3/2012 c8
2ellie111lolz
ok...that was CONFUSING!she likes him, he becomes her boyfriend and then she doesn't want him to be?then she tells her grandmother they're bf & gf?

ok...that was CONFUSING!she likes him, he becomes her boyfriend and then she doesn't want him to be?then she tells her grandmother they're bf & gf?
2/28/2012 c13
9The Golden Orchid
this story is amazing. i love the funny banter that you have going on between noah and cam. keep going!
check out mine?
http:/www.fictionpress.com/s/2987713/1/Beauty_and_the_Jock

this story is amazing. i love the funny banter that you have going on between noah and cam. keep going!
check out mine?
http:/www.fictionpress.com/s/2987713/1/Beauty_and_the_Jock
1/11/2012 c11
25SargentLooneyPencil
awesome story.. i keep getting drawn into it.. i love it.. please update your story! please!

awesome story.. i keep getting drawn into it.. i love it.. please update your story! please!
11/16/2011 c10 Oedipa
So I only just came across this, but I like it :) Very cute, very funny, and your characters-your two main characters especially-are likeable, and seem a lot like actual people.
And now I'm wondering what's outside too...
So I only just came across this, but I like it :) Very cute, very funny, and your characters-your two main characters especially-are likeable, and seem a lot like actual people.
And now I'm wondering what's outside too...
3/9/2011 c7 Ice Bubble
The line about the tension shriveling up and dieing is really good. Keep up the awesome!
The line about the tension shriveling up and dieing is really good. Keep up the awesome!
3/9/2011 c5 Ice Bubble
I knew you were an elf! I'll keep your secret...
Anyways, I was kind of confused at first because in the dream, Noah said 'Lauren' so... but then I thought it was just a mistake...
I knew you were an elf! I'll keep your secret...
Anyways, I was kind of confused at first because in the dream, Noah said 'Lauren' so... but then I thought it was just a mistake...
3/9/2011 c2 Ice Bubble
I do hate cliffhangers, unless they're in a good story, and the next chapter is up already. Which means that I don't hate this cliffhanger. :)
I do hate cliffhangers, unless they're in a good story, and the next chapter is up already. Which means that I don't hate this cliffhanger. :)
3/9/2011 c1 Ice Bubble
How is dancing with pirates? Fun?
Very nice introductory chapter! I love the story already! :)
How is dancing with pirates? Fun?
Very nice introductory chapter! I love the story already! :)