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2/27/2013 c1 10DappledKarma
Well, that had some interesting, beautiful imagery. I'll be back for more of this.
8/28/2011 c10 65LJ58
Cleverly done, and wondrous conceptual imagery.

Brava!
3/8/2011 c9 lymli
that's interestin, it's true, people just can get peace in death.
2/25/2011 c7 167nickyO
I love the personification and vivid imagery in this lovely poem
12/10/2010 c1 28frugale
I think you should definitely continue on with your writing! Very evocative imagery here. :)

It might help the reader if you reworked the formatting, though, just to break it up a little and make it easier on the reader's eyes. You could also just post each haiku in a separate chapter. That's what I would do, for one.
12/2/2010 c2 lymli
Delicate and fragile, thin and strong

Life is broken and mended, mended and broken

I like that part.

cool.
12/2/2010 c1 65LJ58
I've always enjoyed good poetry of any genre. I have to respect anyone that can do such fine work with haikus, knowing they are more challenging that most. Good work.

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