for Bothersome10/23/2019 c1 Otakuami
So cute,
So cute,
7/23/2014 c1 A
*squeal* I was so excited to see this snippet from the main story ! I can't wait for you to update more on that ! Zarin's tail slithering around somehow sounds cute !
*squeal* I was so excited to see this snippet from the main story ! I can't wait for you to update more on that ! Zarin's tail slithering around somehow sounds cute !
2/6/2012 c1 Angel
First off, sorry for the ironic name. But that's my name so I can't really do anything about it.
Second..ooh, there really is a lot of sexual tension oozing from them.
Third, the demon, if he was a man, would be almost perfect. The only flaw would be the fact that he is a demon. Sorry if I sound redundant.
Lastly, I like your story. Keep up the good work and I hope I get to read more of your stories. :)
First off, sorry for the ironic name. But that's my name so I can't really do anything about it.
Second..ooh, there really is a lot of sexual tension oozing from them.
Third, the demon, if he was a man, would be almost perfect. The only flaw would be the fact that he is a demon. Sorry if I sound redundant.
Lastly, I like your story. Keep up the good work and I hope I get to read more of your stories. :)
5/29/2011 c1 me
loved it=D (and you probably heard this before, but damn,I wished this wasn't a one shot. It's a story that asks for more!)
loved it=D (and you probably heard this before, but damn,I wished this wasn't a one shot. It's a story that asks for more!)
3/30/2011 c1 Genato
very weird. but very like-able. :) it would've been cooler if she was a Catholic or something. :))
very weird. but very like-able. :) it would've been cooler if she was a Catholic or something. :))
2/16/2011 c1 rusalka
different.pityi is only oneshot.but still wonderfull all the same!
different.pityi is only oneshot.but still wonderfull all the same!
1/31/2011 c1 
1Neverfae
Wonderful! Such a lovely blend of romance, love, and sensuality with a touch of morbidity expected of a demon story. I'll be adding this to my favorites, for sure.
1NeverfaeWonderful! Such a lovely blend of romance, love, and sensuality with a touch of morbidity expected of a demon story. I'll be adding this to my favorites, for sure.
1/12/2011 c1 Anara Celebvilya
Oh man, that was great. I've never read anything like that before. It was really interesting. I can't say that I liked the brother that much, even though he wasn't technically even in the story. Thanks for the entertainment!
=Liz=
Oh man, that was great. I've never read anything like that before. It was really interesting. I can't say that I liked the brother that much, even though he wasn't technically even in the story. Thanks for the entertainment!
=Liz=
12/2/2010 c1 LaLa
This was a very enjoyable and very well written. I really like the chemistry between them and loved their interaction with one another. The story has a nice flow and it did not feel stagnant. I think this would make for an excellent longer story, because I do wonder what kind of demon he is and I am curious about her. Yet, most of all I would love to see the progress of their relationship. Thanks for a great story.
This was a very enjoyable and very well written. I really like the chemistry between them and loved their interaction with one another. The story has a nice flow and it did not feel stagnant. I think this would make for an excellent longer story, because I do wonder what kind of demon he is and I am curious about her. Yet, most of all I would love to see the progress of their relationship. Thanks for a great story.