
12/5/2010 c3
5effervial
First kiss ;) Sexy. Ahaha, she's legal now! *cue dramatic music* Wonder what her family would think about Chase's age.

First kiss ;) Sexy. Ahaha, she's legal now! *cue dramatic music* Wonder what her family would think about Chase's age.
12/5/2010 c3 romancereader
ek! I keep on wanting more of Chase, but I hope Carmen tells people about Chase soon and doesn't sneak out as much. I know you're busy, but please update soon!
ek! I keep on wanting more of Chase, but I hope Carmen tells people about Chase soon and doesn't sneak out as much. I know you're busy, but please update soon!
12/5/2010 c3 Ilovepunks
Aw man. This was way good! ek! I love chase. Yumy. Update soon? Thanks.
-ilovepunks x
Aw man. This was way good! ek! I love chase. Yumy. Update soon? Thanks.
-ilovepunks x
12/5/2010 c3 RoxyHeart
Chase is actually the lovliest guy ever; i want him!
update fast again next time :)
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Chase is actually the lovliest guy ever; i want him!
update fast again next time :)
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12/5/2010 c2 ilovepunks
wo! even though ive told you in person what i think, youve been nagging on and on for me to review so here. :)
7 reviews? i think not. make that 9- no thanks to me;]
i absolutely larrve chase. he sounds hawt;')
ek. x
wo! even though ive told you in person what i think, youve been nagging on and on for me to review so here. :)
7 reviews? i think not. make that 9- no thanks to me;]
i absolutely larrve chase. he sounds hawt;')
ek. x
12/5/2010 c1 ilovepunks
ek! this is so good! at first i didnt wanna read it and couldnt be bothered but its amaze:D i love it
ek! this is so good! at first i didnt wanna read it and couldnt be bothered but its amaze:D i love it
12/4/2010 c2 romancereader
This is so good and I'm caught up in Chase. He seems tough and nice at the same time! I can't wait for the next chapter, please update soon!
This is so good and I'm caught up in Chase. He seems tough and nice at the same time! I can't wait for the next chapter, please update soon!
12/4/2010 c2 dakota s
this is pretty intriguing. can't wait for your next update
this is pretty intriguing. can't wait for your next update
12/4/2010 c2 effervial
Bless her! Adorable child. The relationship between them are so sweet. I love the characters. :) Keep going!
Bless her! Adorable child. The relationship between them are so sweet. I love the characters. :) Keep going!
12/4/2010 c2
1Kisara-chan
Wow, this is... really good. I like how the characters really stick to personality, and how Chase oozes "danger". He's the kind of guy you see and every warning bell in your head goes off. I also think that Carmen's an adorable girl, who's humble and isn't too-good-to-be-true. She knows how to take pleasure in little things. Good work. Really hope you update soon.

Wow, this is... really good. I like how the characters really stick to personality, and how Chase oozes "danger". He's the kind of guy you see and every warning bell in your head goes off. I also think that Carmen's an adorable girl, who's humble and isn't too-good-to-be-true. She knows how to take pleasure in little things. Good work. Really hope you update soon.
12/4/2010 c2 RoxyHeart
I love how you updated so quick, update that quick next time :)
that text he sent his phone was so lovely :)
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I love how you updated so quick, update that quick next time :)
that text he sent his phone was so lovely :)
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12/2/2010 c1 RoxyHeart
I LOVE IT!
you better not abandon this one like all your others.
Miss Parkinson would be proud of your writing skills :)
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I LOVE IT!
you better not abandon this one like all your others.
Miss Parkinson would be proud of your writing skills :)
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