for Winter Dreams: An Advent Calendar9/30/2011 c7 AxariaJustice13
Oh this is GOOD :DDD
I hope that yew are still updating c:
Oh this is GOOD :DDD
I hope that yew are still updating c:
4/12/2011 c7 12eafggdsg
Wow! Really loving this story so far! You have some really interesting characters, which makes it really fun to read. :) And just looked at the published and last updated dates. And dear lord! You uploaded 7 chapters within 6 days? Thats impressive! :O Or am I reading that wrong? In the UK we write the date first and then the month, but apparantly in the US they write it the other way around, so I get confused... Anyway, I'm really enjoying the story so I hope you update soon! :)
Wow! Really loving this story so far! You have some really interesting characters, which makes it really fun to read. :) And just looked at the published and last updated dates. And dear lord! You uploaded 7 chapters within 6 days? Thats impressive! :O Or am I reading that wrong? In the UK we write the date first and then the month, but apparantly in the US they write it the other way around, so I get confused... Anyway, I'm really enjoying the story so I hope you update soon! :)
12/9/2010 c6 
2Krowhop
wha...where is chapter 8? It is the 9th now! (at least here, where I am) I hope everything is ok...
2Krowhopwha...where is chapter 8? It is the 9th now! (at least here, where I am) I hope everything is ok...
12/9/2010 c7 Krowhop
"Every time you don't review, uh... god kills a kitten...?" Srsly. Not cool.
Anyway, glad to see the story progressing, rather than just sex back and forth, or super emo. This last chapter, even with all of the serious emotional baggage, still seemed lighter to me, for some reason. Not sure, but it was good.
"Every time you don't review, uh... god kills a kitten...?" Srsly. Not cool.
Anyway, glad to see the story progressing, rather than just sex back and forth, or super emo. This last chapter, even with all of the serious emotional baggage, still seemed lighter to me, for some reason. Not sure, but it was good.
12/7/2010 c7 Ikkoku
Just so you know, it's best to not beg or threaten your readers to review- it doesn't put you in a good light, and it can actually stop people from reviewing.
Just so you know, it's best to not beg or threaten your readers to review- it doesn't put you in a good light, and it can actually stop people from reviewing.
12/7/2010 c7 YukinoKara
I had a feeling that Indra loved Leilan.
I like how Mithra doesn't really understand love, but still listens to Indra.
I also find it amusing that Mithra left, but doesn't know where he's going to live.
You did a good job with this chapter. :) Good luck with the next one, and I look forward to it!
~YukinoKara
I had a feeling that Indra loved Leilan.
I like how Mithra doesn't really understand love, but still listens to Indra.
I also find it amusing that Mithra left, but doesn't know where he's going to live.
You did a good job with this chapter. :) Good luck with the next one, and I look forward to it!
~YukinoKara
12/6/2010 c6 pretensions
damn, mith is sexy when he gets firm and angry!
such an interesting story. i love unrequited love, pining from afar, love triangles (squares?), and cute angels.
damn, mith is sexy when he gets firm and angry!
such an interesting story. i love unrequited love, pining from afar, love triangles (squares?), and cute angels.
12/6/2010 c6 YukinoKara
An ultimatum. Interesting. I'm mildly surprised by Mithra's behaviour, and amused by Leilan's possessiveness.
I'm curious to see what will happen next. :)
Good luck with the next chapter, and I look forward to it!
~YukinoKara
An ultimatum. Interesting. I'm mildly surprised by Mithra's behaviour, and amused by Leilan's possessiveness.
I'm curious to see what will happen next. :)
Good luck with the next chapter, and I look forward to it!
~YukinoKara
12/6/2010 c6 2Keona Raynalise
Well, THAT makes sense. Leilan seems like such a brat here. And poor Rin! Although, he didn't do anything about his unrequited love... ! I can suppose Lil taunted Rin with that, for Rin to hate him so much. 'Cuz I don't think Rin would hate him that much if it was just that Lei managed to get with Mith... He DID lose his chance. Now i wonder what Rin is gonna do about Mith! lol Im reading this when im SUPPOSED to be doing homework! Im looking forward to more Madison! When can we expect more of him?
2Keona RaynaliseWell, THAT makes sense. Leilan seems like such a brat here. And poor Rin! Although, he didn't do anything about his unrequited love... ! I can suppose Lil taunted Rin with that, for Rin to hate him so much. 'Cuz I don't think Rin would hate him that much if it was just that Lei managed to get with Mith... He DID lose his chance. Now i wonder what Rin is gonna do about Mith! lol Im reading this when im SUPPOSED to be doing homework! Im looking forward to more Madison! When can we expect more of him?
12/6/2010 c5 2Krowhop
Ok, so, we haven't seen or heard of the original character since chapter one...and ...I am dying to know how he ties into this all now! I mean, I can understand winter's hatred of spring, when every spring he ...*guessing time* looses contact with the human/bondmate? Just a stab in the dark there...
2KrowhopOk, so, we haven't seen or heard of the original character since chapter one...and ...I am dying to know how he ties into this all now! I mean, I can understand winter's hatred of spring, when every spring he ...*guessing time* looses contact with the human/bondmate? Just a stab in the dark there...
12/5/2010 c5 YukinoKara
I find it extremely amusing that Leilan (and Rin) seem to think that Mithra belongs to him.
I think that Madison (I haven't forgotten about him, yet) has something to do with Mithra. Possibly being him.
The whole Aristomachiel thing confuses me a bit. Is it that a dominant group of angels are ruled by him, and follow his beliefs? The Bonding part I do understand, and am quite fond of, though. xD
Rin seems to believe in love (which is cute). I was surprised that he referred to Leilan as Spring, and am glad that you gave further information about the implications of it.
You did a great job with this chapter. :)
Good luck with the next one, and I look forward to it! I hope that you get well soon.
~YukinoKara
I find it extremely amusing that Leilan (and Rin) seem to think that Mithra belongs to him.
I think that Madison (I haven't forgotten about him, yet) has something to do with Mithra. Possibly being him.
The whole Aristomachiel thing confuses me a bit. Is it that a dominant group of angels are ruled by him, and follow his beliefs? The Bonding part I do understand, and am quite fond of, though. xD
Rin seems to believe in love (which is cute). I was surprised that he referred to Leilan as Spring, and am glad that you gave further information about the implications of it.
You did a great job with this chapter. :)
Good luck with the next one, and I look forward to it! I hope that you get well soon.
~YukinoKara
12/5/2010 c4 YukinoKara
I find Mithra's way of seeing the world fascinating. He's quite observant, particularly when it comes to the other angels. It's fun to read about what he notices.
I think this chapter made me like Indra even more. Again, I'm probably biased, but I like how he's glad that Mithra's still meeting Rin. I am curious about how he seems to know so much about Rin, though.
Leilan sulking is very entertaining. For now, at least. xD
I love the names you use. 'Lumaris' is an interesting name for the Angel world.
Sorry about the late review, and I hope that you're not coming down with something.
You did a great job with this chapter, and I'm off to read the next one.
~YukinoKara
I find Mithra's way of seeing the world fascinating. He's quite observant, particularly when it comes to the other angels. It's fun to read about what he notices.
I think this chapter made me like Indra even more. Again, I'm probably biased, but I like how he's glad that Mithra's still meeting Rin. I am curious about how he seems to know so much about Rin, though.
Leilan sulking is very entertaining. For now, at least. xD
I love the names you use. 'Lumaris' is an interesting name for the Angel world.
Sorry about the late review, and I hope that you're not coming down with something.
You did a great job with this chapter, and I'm off to read the next one.
~YukinoKara
12/5/2010 c5 2Keona Raynalise
Good! Never tell! lol I love to come up with theories! Its always fun! SO i got SOME of it right? Im guessing its the reincarnation part? I think the bonding to a human thing is interesting! What does that mean since Madison is human? There has to be something there... And the rivalry! If they never were together... And the fact that he knows how Leilan 'marks' people... I seriously wonder what that is all about... Looking forward to the next chapter! And more Madison! Or however you spell his name...
2Keona RaynaliseGood! Never tell! lol I love to come up with theories! Its always fun! SO i got SOME of it right? Im guessing its the reincarnation part? I think the bonding to a human thing is interesting! What does that mean since Madison is human? There has to be something there... And the rivalry! If they never were together... And the fact that he knows how Leilan 'marks' people... I seriously wonder what that is all about... Looking forward to the next chapter! And more Madison! Or however you spell his name...