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1/9/2011 c1 8SpasticLittleGirl
Hey gorgeous, how you doin?

WHY IS IT SO MYSTERIOUS? And sad :(

But it was still really good
12/2/2010 c1 119SomeRandomScribbles
It's really interesting how you don't start from the beginning in this piece, but gradually reveal what has happened before throughout :) Your descriptions are great, and the emotions are clear, making the reader feel really involved :)

The pace is really good too, but I think the end was maybe a little rushed? Just a thought ^^ It would be awesome if you could expand on this to give us the whole story - I'm putting it on alert just in case! :)

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