for Today12/5/2010 c1 
8black.magic89
This is a very striking piece, so much in fact I had to reread it three times. The last three lines are very powerful, well done
8black.magic89This is a very striking piece, so much in fact I had to reread it three times. The last three lines are very powerful, well done
12/5/2010 c1 119SomeRandomScribbles
This is a dark and heavy piece. I like how much emotion you've put into it. It could possibly do with a little more development to make it more original and striking - overall, though, a good poem :)
119SomeRandomScribblesThis is a dark and heavy piece. I like how much emotion you've put into it. It could possibly do with a little more development to make it more original and striking - overall, though, a good poem :)