for Castellum Cortem12/8/2010 c2 HowlingWolf
Oh Dramatic Irony. :D
Oh Dramatic Irony. :D
12/8/2010 c2 
31HeroofEnelios
This was a good short chapter. Cyndi's character is given depth in this length and I like how you did it. There is detail in the story and the character attitudes like Alyssa and Cyndi, and that's what I like. Write more soon, great chapter!
31HeroofEneliosThis was a good short chapter. Cyndi's character is given depth in this length and I like how you did it. There is detail in the story and the character attitudes like Alyssa and Cyndi, and that's what I like. Write more soon, great chapter!
12/8/2010 c2 6DashingtoFluttershy
Love this chapter! This is a very intresting idea and you have good writing style can't wait to read more!
-HyperActiveTwilightHater
6DashingtoFluttershyLove this chapter! This is a very intresting idea and you have good writing style can't wait to read more!
-HyperActiveTwilightHater
12/6/2010 c1 DashingtoFluttershy
Intersting! I like it so far! It's sounds fairly original and I like it! Can't wait to read more!
-HyperActiveTwilightHater
Intersting! I like it so far! It's sounds fairly original and I like it! Can't wait to read more!
-HyperActiveTwilightHater
12/6/2010 c1 31HeroofEnelios
First, before I say anything I want to say that you did a great job on the summary. This story is very unique and the way that it starts has really grabbed my attention. There is a great amount of detail in this chapter (And that can be very hard to do in the first chapter, believe me I know since i have that same issue as other authors do as well). That said, a great beginning and I would love to be able to read more.
Write more soon please! :)
31HeroofEneliosFirst, before I say anything I want to say that you did a great job on the summary. This story is very unique and the way that it starts has really grabbed my attention. There is a great amount of detail in this chapter (And that can be very hard to do in the first chapter, believe me I know since i have that same issue as other authors do as well). That said, a great beginning and I would love to be able to read more.
Write more soon please! :)