for I Hate Love Stories9/2/2011 c4 
1bookADDICT6
I can't believe what a bitch that supposedly best friend is. Ugh, I find it disgusting that she would do something to Charlotte's mom who is her best friend, marriend, has a child, and a grown woman.
I thought I wouldn't like Evan, but he's slowly growing on me. Guys who act like jerks with little sisters always win me over. It just proves Evan's not a world class jerk because would could be mean to a little girl?
1bookADDICT6I can't believe what a bitch that supposedly best friend is. Ugh, I find it disgusting that she would do something to Charlotte's mom who is her best friend, marriend, has a child, and a grown woman.
I thought I wouldn't like Evan, but he's slowly growing on me. Guys who act like jerks with little sisters always win me over. It just proves Evan's not a world class jerk because would could be mean to a little girl?
9/2/2011 c3 bookADDICT6
LOL. I love when bedrooms look into other bedrooms because funny stuff like this happen. My only problem with the story so far is that you don't separate big paragraphs. Other than that I find that everything is working so far.
LOL. I love when bedrooms look into other bedrooms because funny stuff like this happen. My only problem with the story so far is that you don't separate big paragraphs. Other than that I find that everything is working so far.
9/2/2011 c2 bookADDICT6
I like the idea of the story so far. It doesn't seem like the typical lovey dovey story. I like Charlotte because she isn't a nice girl. Well, she is, but she has an attitude when people piss her off.
You should work on your spacing though. Majority of the time big paragraphs hurt my head and I don't read them thoroughly.
I like the idea of the story so far. It doesn't seem like the typical lovey dovey story. I like Charlotte because she isn't a nice girl. Well, she is, but she has an attitude when people piss her off.
You should work on your spacing though. Majority of the time big paragraphs hurt my head and I don't read them thoroughly.
7/22/2011 c29 8Dreamerofthesky
Wow. Hmm her dad came! Well I think she needs to forgive him sooner or later but she does have a hard time letting go of grugdes so it will take a while. I don't know what to think of her dad coming. Ok Char was being a baby about the dress. I mean seriously? Haha I lOVE her cousins they remind me a bit of mine. Continue!
8DreameroftheskyWow. Hmm her dad came! Well I think she needs to forgive him sooner or later but she does have a hard time letting go of grugdes so it will take a while. I don't know what to think of her dad coming. Ok Char was being a baby about the dress. I mean seriously? Haha I lOVE her cousins they remind me a bit of mine. Continue!
7/4/2011 c29 2I Will Not Die I Will Survive
:O why? i cant wait to se the drama in the next chapter update soon XD
2I Will Not Die I Will Survive:O why? i cant wait to se the drama in the next chapter update soon XD
6/28/2011 c28 8Dreamerofthesky
Bravo! Nice job! Oh no what else is going to go wrong? I really like her cousin, Jake. He seems really cool. Ahh Dean go away! I don't like you! Besides your name sounds like bean which is stupid! Go away!
:)
8DreameroftheskyBravo! Nice job! Oh no what else is going to go wrong? I really like her cousin, Jake. He seems really cool. Ahh Dean go away! I don't like you! Besides your name sounds like bean which is stupid! Go away!
:)
6/28/2011 c3 violet.castle
Wow, this is really good. Alot of words, so it's easier to picture. You're good at this... :D good job!
Wow, this is really good. Alot of words, so it's easier to picture. You're good at this... :D good job!
6/27/2011 c28 3Brightheart
wow. i loved it. seems like jake's the funny one. evan's such a cute boyfriend.
cant' wait for the next chapter.
3Brightheartwow. i loved it. seems like jake's the funny one. evan's such a cute boyfriend.
cant' wait for the next chapter.
6/27/2011 c27 8Dreamerofthesky
Nice chapter! I really like how you did the surgery! The way she had those flash backs of her father and stuff. :) ps sorry lame review!
8DreameroftheskyNice chapter! I really like how you did the surgery! The way she had those flash backs of her father and stuff. :) ps sorry lame review!
6/27/2011 c28 PureLifeDLV
This story is so awesome, and nonetheless intriguing. Since I just started reading it today I'm definitely a Dean hater, and I love Evan. I find him, and I'll repeat the word, intriguing. I admire Phoebe because I definitely hate cheaters
So update soon, I want to know how the family reunion goes :P
This story is so awesome, and nonetheless intriguing. Since I just started reading it today I'm definitely a Dean hater, and I love Evan. I find him, and I'll repeat the word, intriguing. I admire Phoebe because I definitely hate cheaters
So update soon, I want to know how the family reunion goes :P