4/26/2011 c26 5TMSantos
Yay! Thank you very much for uploading, and I love this chapter.
I can't wait for your next upload!
Yay! Thank you very much for uploading, and I love this chapter.
I can't wait for your next upload!
4/25/2011 c26 YOUNG-the wild. free. in love
okay. i have one question.
During Evan's POV, his mom said
"Have you told her yet?" Mom asked. I laughed and shook my head.
"If I told her, she will never come out of her house again" I said laughing.
I was just wondering what they were talking about.
Told Charlotte WHAT? and why was he laughing?
Great chap!
okay. i have one question.
During Evan's POV, his mom said
"Have you told her yet?" Mom asked. I laughed and shook my head.
"If I told her, she will never come out of her house again" I said laughing.
I was just wondering what they were talking about.
Told Charlotte WHAT? and why was he laughing?
Great chap!
4/22/2011 c26 Da-zGreen
Love Evan's POV, you should do that more oftenly, because we do want to know what he thinks sometimes. Lol. Anyways, love their little first date. Sounds so realistic! Lol. Anyways, hope you update soon!
Love Evan's POV, you should do that more oftenly, because we do want to know what he thinks sometimes. Lol. Anyways, love their little first date. Sounds so realistic! Lol. Anyways, hope you update soon!
4/21/2011 c26 8Dreamerofthesky
Aww very sweet chapter! I like how you didn't over do it (the date). It was sweet and realistic. :) Which is great! Is she going to get the pastic surgery? oo! haha Can't wait to see what happens!
Aww very sweet chapter! I like how you didn't over do it (the date). It was sweet and realistic. :) Which is great! Is she going to get the pastic surgery? oo! haha Can't wait to see what happens!
4/21/2011 c26 porcelainstars
Just finished reading all the 26 chapters. I'll definitely be following this story.:)
Just finished reading all the 26 chapters. I'll definitely be following this story.:)
4/20/2011 c13 4xGaaraxFanxGirlx
Dean!:D
And well Im from texas and I have a accent and I don't drop my g's.
Dean!:D
And well Im from texas and I have a accent and I don't drop my g's.
4/4/2011 c25 8Dreamerofthesky
This story is great I love it! It wasn't what I fully expected (which is great). Oh just a little thing, I've noticed that your writing has gotten a little sloppy lately. It has had more spelling errors but anywho. :) Please update soon! :)
This story is great I love it! It wasn't what I fully expected (which is great). Oh just a little thing, I've noticed that your writing has gotten a little sloppy lately. It has had more spelling errors but anywho. :) Please update soon! :)
4/3/2011 c7 Dreamerofthesky
Hey so I came across this story and read a bit of it and really liked it. I haven't read all of it yet. :) but just wanted to say somethig about this chapter :) I found it a bit confusing other than your other chapters. For example, Charlotte said she had never seen Evan's room, but than the next scene when she was in his room she said it looked the same it had the for the past 8 years.
Anyway just a little something that was weird. Anyway I LOVE this story! :)
Hey so I came across this story and read a bit of it and really liked it. I haven't read all of it yet. :) but just wanted to say somethig about this chapter :) I found it a bit confusing other than your other chapters. For example, Charlotte said she had never seen Evan's room, but than the next scene when she was in his room she said it looked the same it had the for the past 8 years.
Anyway just a little something that was weird. Anyway I LOVE this story! :)
4/2/2011 c25 Da-zGreen
OMG! I love this song by PINK! lOl... I can't believe that she would even conside somehitng like that though.. I understand her reasoning, but still... Lol... Anyways, can't wait to see how Evan would take it! you have to update soon!
OMG! I love this song by PINK! lOl... I can't believe that she would even conside somehitng like that though.. I understand her reasoning, but still... Lol... Anyways, can't wait to see how Evan would take it! you have to update soon!
3/30/2011 c25 27Princess97
That was an awesome story! You have quite a unique character there. Keep it up! :)
That was an awesome story! You have quite a unique character there. Keep it up! :)
3/30/2011 c25 2I Will Not Die I Will Survive
i can see why she wants to get rid of it because of the bad memories and she doesnt feel comfortable wearing a swimsuit... but she even said it felt like a mistake, cant wait for the update XD
i can see why she wants to get rid of it because of the bad memories and she doesnt feel comfortable wearing a swimsuit... but she even said it felt like a mistake, cant wait for the update XD