1/27/2011 c1 YOUNG-the wild. free. in love
Hello. I almost forgot about this story until my sister reminded me of it. Haha. You know I love this story but I haven't gotten on here since lyk 2 or 3 weeks ago. And I miss the daily updates. I'm just wondering when you're going to continue the story because I miss Char and Evan and Dean and the rest of the characters.
Hello. I almost forgot about this story until my sister reminded me of it. Haha. You know I love this story but I haven't gotten on here since lyk 2 or 3 weeks ago. And I miss the daily updates. I'm just wondering when you're going to continue the story because I miss Char and Evan and Dean and the rest of the characters.
1/11/2011 c22 Notmy Realname
I L.O.V.E. A Walk to Remember! The book & the movie! You mentioning it just made this story all the more better :) & it was already amazingly good to begin with.
I L.O.V.E. A Walk to Remember! The book & the movie! You mentioning it just made this story all the more better :) & it was already amazingly good to begin with.
1/7/2011 c22 2miaaa
Great Chapter!
A Walk to Remember is my all time favourite film :')
I cry at it every time ;D
Update soon!
Great Chapter!
A Walk to Remember is my all time favourite film :')
I cry at it every time ;D
Update soon!
1/3/2011 c22 YOUNG-the wild. free. in love
Aw. I'm sorry that you have writer's block. But it's ok because this chapter is so good! I can't wait for the next chapter. And it's so funny how Dean just showed up at the most random time asking about a cat. lol. Creepy much! lol. Btw, I'm wondering if Dean is going to cause Char and Evan's bickering in the near future. Or maybe he's going to get in the middle of their relationship. Btw, what happened with Dean's sister, (forgot her name. lol.) and Evan's best friend (forgot his name too. lol.) UPDATE SOON PLZ! :D
Aw. I'm sorry that you have writer's block. But it's ok because this chapter is so good! I can't wait for the next chapter. And it's so funny how Dean just showed up at the most random time asking about a cat. lol. Creepy much! lol. Btw, I'm wondering if Dean is going to cause Char and Evan's bickering in the near future. Or maybe he's going to get in the middle of their relationship. Btw, what happened with Dean's sister, (forgot her name. lol.) and Evan's best friend (forgot his name too. lol.) UPDATE SOON PLZ! :D
1/3/2011 c22 Da-zGreen
Thats no problem that you were on writers block! We all have it. Lol. But damn, I miss all these great ChapterS! Freaking alerts, they were reseted! I hate that. lol. Anyways, how weird of Dean to show up at night and asked if that cat was Char. lol. Wow, can you say obessesed much! lol. Anyways, I hope that you will be able to update soon!
Thats no problem that you were on writers block! We all have it. Lol. But damn, I miss all these great ChapterS! Freaking alerts, they were reseted! I hate that. lol. Anyways, how weird of Dean to show up at night and asked if that cat was Char. lol. Wow, can you say obessesed much! lol. Anyways, I hope that you will be able to update soon!
1/3/2011 c21 Da-zGreen
I vote more of Dean! This way, there will be something they are bickering about! Lol. I'm so glad that Evan likes the same thing she likes! But the only thing that they don't have in common is the belief in love and I believe that will be on of the problems leading up to their little bickers. lol. Well, I'm moving onto the next chapter!
I vote more of Dean! This way, there will be something they are bickering about! Lol. I'm so glad that Evan likes the same thing she likes! But the only thing that they don't have in common is the belief in love and I believe that will be on of the problems leading up to their little bickers. lol. Well, I'm moving onto the next chapter!
1/3/2011 c20 Da-zGreen
DAmn it! How can I miss this chapter! Freaking alerts! Gosh, anyways, nice to know that they are gonna go on a date! I can't wait to find out what you find amusing and funny in their relationship. I'm moving onto the next chapteR!
DAmn it! How can I miss this chapter! Freaking alerts! Gosh, anyways, nice to know that they are gonna go on a date! I can't wait to find out what you find amusing and funny in their relationship. I'm moving onto the next chapteR!
12/31/2010 c22 jkdef
haha she /would/ drive the kidnappers crazy
haha she /would/ drive the kidnappers crazy
12/31/2010 c17 MeMe
Good chapter as usual :)
I've noticed this before, but it seems more pronounced in this chapter... you say she will or I will instead of she'll or I'll, that isn't wrong obviously, but it seems in a way stiff. I just think that the story would flow a bit better if you softened those things a bit... but then again that's just me. You have your own writing style and if you do that automatically... I just feel that the story is informal but the sentence structure in some places is a bit on the formalish side...
But again, I love the story so that isn't a big deal, just pointing it out.
Good chapter as usual :)
I've noticed this before, but it seems more pronounced in this chapter... you say she will or I will instead of she'll or I'll, that isn't wrong obviously, but it seems in a way stiff. I just think that the story would flow a bit better if you softened those things a bit... but then again that's just me. You have your own writing style and if you do that automatically... I just feel that the story is informal but the sentence structure in some places is a bit on the formalish side...
But again, I love the story so that isn't a big deal, just pointing it out.
12/30/2010 c22 Anya the Lascivious
Ah! Evan the tough-player-hot-jerk has a good side! It isn't too mushy, which is awesome, and not too vague and hostile, which is even better.
Update a.s.a.p!
Hehe... I didn't find this update in my inbox, so I didn't review. BUT THAT IS ALL GOOD NAO!
Yea.
Ah! Evan the tough-player-hot-jerk has a good side! It isn't too mushy, which is awesome, and not too vague and hostile, which is even better.
Update a.s.a.p!
Hehe... I didn't find this update in my inbox, so I didn't review. BUT THAT IS ALL GOOD NAO!
Yea.
12/30/2010 c22 5TMSantos
omg, the last part was so sweet.
LOL! Can't wait for more. Advanced happy new year! =D
omg, the last part was so sweet.
LOL! Can't wait for more. Advanced happy new year! =D
12/30/2010 c2 Sneha
i really like this story, it was interesting.
i really like this story, it was interesting.