for My Name12/11/2010 c1 
16jesusfreak100percent
Wow! Generally, I like poems that rhyme (hypocritical, I know) but that was amazing. It was still very obviously poetry, I loved the idea and you captured the characters (if you can call them that) very well.
Also - first reviewer!
16jesusfreak100percentWow! Generally, I like poems that rhyme (hypocritical, I know) but that was amazing. It was still very obviously poetry, I loved the idea and you captured the characters (if you can call them that) very well.
Also - first reviewer!