3/27/2018 c32 4R. Ficst
Thank you so much for showing a working ace relationship! Great development. Looks like you have an interesting sequel coming up!
Thank you so much for showing a working ace relationship! Great development. Looks like you have an interesting sequel coming up!
10/9/2015 c1 10IhaveNoAmbition969
You should let people know its not actually about wolves but about werewolves. This is annoying.
You should let people know its not actually about wolves but about werewolves. This is annoying.
11/10/2013 c32 imabrx2
Aside from some grammar and spelling errors the story is good, i am glad you continued it. It was fun to read and i enjoyed the characters
Aside from some grammar and spelling errors the story is good, i am glad you continued it. It was fun to read and i enjoyed the characters
10/23/2013 c32 19Alaeryel
Well BLOODY HELL! I am already liking Gabriel and I want to see Vincent slaughtered unmercifully! Poor Shane is caught between a rock and a hard place! I am hoping maybe there is or will be a sequel to this that goes into Vincent's dementia and what will happen-GREAT WRITING here!
Well BLOODY HELL! I am already liking Gabriel and I want to see Vincent slaughtered unmercifully! Poor Shane is caught between a rock and a hard place! I am hoping maybe there is or will be a sequel to this that goes into Vincent's dementia and what will happen-GREAT WRITING here!
10/23/2013 c31 Alaeryel
I LOVED this chapter-I couldn't help grinning like crazy when Lukas spoke with Jason as to what to do for Emma-this was PRICELESS! I can't believe this is almost done and my heart is crying!
I LOVED this chapter-I couldn't help grinning like crazy when Lukas spoke with Jason as to what to do for Emma-this was PRICELESS! I can't believe this is almost done and my heart is crying!
10/18/2013 c32 Guest
I found this a couple of days ago and just finished it ! : )
I found this a couple of days ago and just finished it ! : )
3/31/2013 c30 Tiffany
This was a really nice story.
This was a really nice story.
3/14/2013 c30 avidmoonstar
Oh wow, first I feel I must apologize for those other reviewers. I'm really hoping it's just one person who decided to be a jerk and post a bunch of times. I'm so sorry for those rude comments!
On to my review...I absolutely loved this story! I always enjoy reading different werewolf stories just to see how other people envision that world. My favorite aspect was that you made the idea of mates such a low-key event. Many stories I've read made it seem like the sky exploded when mates met. It appears much more reality-based when it just happens, instead of fireworks and choirs bursting out of nowhere.
When Emma first admitted to being asexual, I was surprised and...concerned? I couldn't understand how their relationship could work if she was asexual, but the speech she gave Lukas was absolutely correct. Some people just don't crave and/or need sex and that doesn't mean they can't have romantic relationships. I commend you for making it a part of your story and treating it as normal. Because it is, normal.
I love Lukas as the main character. I love his vulnerability and accessibility, at least to Emma. He's not the typical closed-off alpha male, it's-my-way-or-the-highway man. He just seems so ordinary, and I love it.
I do have a few detail-oriented questions. What happens to their clothes when the werewolves shift? There's no mention of it. I've read stories where the clothes shredded during shifting, leaving them naked after transforming back, and also where the clothes were magically protected. I was just curious about your take. Also, did Lukas' family really die in an accident? I thought it was mentioned that they had been killed by hunters but he told Emma it was an accident. I know he told her that before she knew he was a wolf, so I wasn't sure if that was a cover-up.
Lovely story, really.
Oh wow, first I feel I must apologize for those other reviewers. I'm really hoping it's just one person who decided to be a jerk and post a bunch of times. I'm so sorry for those rude comments!
On to my review...I absolutely loved this story! I always enjoy reading different werewolf stories just to see how other people envision that world. My favorite aspect was that you made the idea of mates such a low-key event. Many stories I've read made it seem like the sky exploded when mates met. It appears much more reality-based when it just happens, instead of fireworks and choirs bursting out of nowhere.
When Emma first admitted to being asexual, I was surprised and...concerned? I couldn't understand how their relationship could work if she was asexual, but the speech she gave Lukas was absolutely correct. Some people just don't crave and/or need sex and that doesn't mean they can't have romantic relationships. I commend you for making it a part of your story and treating it as normal. Because it is, normal.
I love Lukas as the main character. I love his vulnerability and accessibility, at least to Emma. He's not the typical closed-off alpha male, it's-my-way-or-the-highway man. He just seems so ordinary, and I love it.
I do have a few detail-oriented questions. What happens to their clothes when the werewolves shift? There's no mention of it. I've read stories where the clothes shredded during shifting, leaving them naked after transforming back, and also where the clothes were magically protected. I was just curious about your take. Also, did Lukas' family really die in an accident? I thought it was mentioned that they had been killed by hunters but he told Emma it was an accident. I know he told her that before she knew he was a wolf, so I wasn't sure if that was a cover-up.
Lovely story, really.
2/1/2013 c30 Guest
Really liking this story! Too bad she's asexual any way to change that? Keep updating regularly please I'm constantly checking this story
Really liking this story! Too bad she's asexual any way to change that? Keep updating regularly please I'm constantly checking this story
1/30/2013 c29 19Alaeryel
NOW IT IS GETTING BETTER AND BETTER-another type of shifters are coming plus the hunters-oh boy WATCH OUT! I had to chuckle at the idea of Lukas being his own k-9 unit-that was BRILLIANT! I cannot wait for more-and will apologize now in case there is another lapse in my reading immediately-there is alot on my plate and health is keeping some of it at a stand still!
NOW IT IS GETTING BETTER AND BETTER-another type of shifters are coming plus the hunters-oh boy WATCH OUT! I had to chuckle at the idea of Lukas being his own k-9 unit-that was BRILLIANT! I cannot wait for more-and will apologize now in case there is another lapse in my reading immediately-there is alot on my plate and health is keeping some of it at a stand still!
1/30/2013 c28 Alaeryel
YAY she accepted him-I AM JUST SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO HAPPY RIGHT NOW! And I am really really happy that Lukas and Talon are on the road to recovery now and their misconceptions are finally put to rest-it will be VERY INTERESTING to see what happens from here!
YAY she accepted him-I AM JUST SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO HAPPY RIGHT NOW! And I am really really happy that Lukas and Talon are on the road to recovery now and their misconceptions are finally put to rest-it will be VERY INTERESTING to see what happens from here!
1/30/2013 c27 Alaeryel
UH OH AGAIN-this is not good and I can't see Lukas killing her friend or the cop altho I am curious how he is going to handle the mess he has made now! DAMN IT-I was hoping Emma had FINALLY COME TO HER SENSES-oh well we will see what happens later I am sure!
UH OH AGAIN-this is not good and I can't see Lukas killing her friend or the cop altho I am curious how he is going to handle the mess he has made now! DAMN IT-I was hoping Emma had FINALLY COME TO HER SENSES-oh well we will see what happens later I am sure!