for Keeping the Distance10/10/2011 c2 ChameleonZ says
I have three things I wanna say:
1)I have a REAL fictionpress account (with the same username above minus the 'says...'), but am too lazy to login now.
2)My REAL name is Melissa too (!) which is one of the reasons why I like this story, besides the fact that it is amazingly awesome.
3)Please update, like' ASAP.
Thank you and UPDATE!
PS:Jeesh, I sound like the school paper on a bad day.
You know, except for the Thank you and update part, 'cuz I'm pretty sure school papers NEVER say that.
PPS: Update. As in, NOW.
I have three things I wanna say:
1)I have a REAL fictionpress account (with the same username above minus the 'says...'), but am too lazy to login now.
2)My REAL name is Melissa too (!) which is one of the reasons why I like this story, besides the fact that it is amazingly awesome.
3)Please update, like' ASAP.
Thank you and UPDATE!
PS:Jeesh, I sound like the school paper on a bad day.
You know, except for the Thank you and update part, 'cuz I'm pretty sure school papers NEVER say that.
PPS: Update. As in, NOW.
1/17/2011 c2 DELETE THIS ACCOUNT NOW 323402
i really like this story
please please please update soon ;D
i really like this story
please please please update soon ;D
1/16/2011 c2 
2renegade01
because he needs melissa, thats why he's lonely! too early for that revelation? fine, i'll come back later...
;)
2renegade01because he needs melissa, thats why he's lonely! too early for that revelation? fine, i'll come back later...
;)
12/21/2010 c1 renegade01
yay, i'm already excited for this. as soon as i read jace's name i was like, cool a spin-off. i really should have recognized lance.
dude, i loved the banter. melissa's character is awesome. she looks like she can give as good as she gets. don't leave us hanging. ;)
yay, i'm already excited for this. as soon as i read jace's name i was like, cool a spin-off. i really should have recognized lance.
dude, i loved the banter. melissa's character is awesome. she looks like she can give as good as she gets. don't leave us hanging. ;)
12/21/2010 c1 ChaEL16
oh god, it's Lance's own love story! aw...he's a jerk, but i guess he also deserves his own love of his life.:D
and just wondering, how come samantha got blue eyes? i'm not saying it's impossible, and not to sound nerd like, but she'll only have blue eyes if she got both recessive alles from her parents. so in other words, the only way she should have blue eyes, if her mom is half filipino. i'm sorry for all that, don't really want to sound like a smart ass, but just saying. you don't really get to see half filipino who has blue eyes. :D
oh god, it's Lance's own love story! aw...he's a jerk, but i guess he also deserves his own love of his life.:D
and just wondering, how come samantha got blue eyes? i'm not saying it's impossible, and not to sound nerd like, but she'll only have blue eyes if she got both recessive alles from her parents. so in other words, the only way she should have blue eyes, if her mom is half filipino. i'm sorry for all that, don't really want to sound like a smart ass, but just saying. you don't really get to see half filipino who has blue eyes. :D
12/20/2010 c1 dee
And I found the sequel. Yay! Hope Jace and Gabby are here and there in this story. I quite like Lance. He is an ass, but loyal. So it's okay. And his handsomeness doesn't hurt either.
And I found the sequel. Yay! Hope Jace and Gabby are here and there in this story. I quite like Lance. He is an ass, but loyal. So it's okay. And his handsomeness doesn't hurt either.
12/20/2010 c1 anonym
cool story so far
cool story so far
12/20/2010 c1 1StoryMonster
This was the first story in the last ten I actually enjoyed.
The part about moles is awesome.
=D
Melissa's got guts, and Lance is BRILLIANT.
xD
So. UPDATE!
1StoryMonsterThis was the first story in the last ten I actually enjoyed.
The part about moles is awesome.
=D
Melissa's got guts, and Lance is BRILLIANT.
xD
So. UPDATE!
12/20/2010 c1 10A Different Kind of Yellow
Good start! I like how you're running a side line story to Jace and Gabby's :) Please... keep it up! x
10A Different Kind of YellowGood start! I like how you're running a side line story to Jace and Gabby's :) Please... keep it up! x
12/20/2010 c1 Heyy
Wow this is so great ha!
i read your story Get Over It, since you first started writing this so i was pumped when i saw you wrote another one and its a spinoff.
i actually always liked jaces bestfriend so i kinda like hearing his story and i'm glad you choose to write about him,
I have one question though
which I'm guessing you can't reply since this is annoymous but oh well.
Where is the timeline set in this story?
and why i thought you'd set it up from where Get over it left off?
Wow this is so great ha!
i read your story Get Over It, since you first started writing this so i was pumped when i saw you wrote another one and its a spinoff.
i actually always liked jaces bestfriend so i kinda like hearing his story and i'm glad you choose to write about him,
I have one question though
which I'm guessing you can't reply since this is annoymous but oh well.
Where is the timeline set in this story?
and why i thought you'd set it up from where Get over it left off?