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4/20/2015 c1 Guest
Damn. That's one hell of a story! Great job on the characters especially, it's one thing to create and develop amazing characters and another entirely to do it in a chapter! I'd love to see some type of conclusion or follow up to this, but you also ended it beautifully. Great job! Keep writing!
12/25/2010 c1 4Some1Else
This is pretty good. I can't see why it hasn't gotten a single review aside from mine. There was quite a lot crammed in here for a short story. It probably could have even been a whole book. A good one, at that. I liked the beginning the most and when Boss got to meet the Spark. Snow is a classy individual. Thanks for sharing, I hope more people will review this in the future.

Good work.

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