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12/27/2010 c2 25SargentLooneyPencil
Hey,, i'm a malaysian too.. this story is okay i guess.. i mean.. i liked it but i think it lacks something... but i think if you were doing this based on a Malaysian theme, i think you should make it cultural also.. i mean keep the tradition but be western.. please don't go awol on the tradition part cuz it'll sound totally stereotypical. i hope you make some changes if you can.. and hopefully, my review made sense... =).. i really see some potential here.. =).. i can;t wait to see what you have in store for us readers and reviewers.. =)

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