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7/16/2012 c8 PuzzledApproach
Love this, Love this, LOVE THIS! lol i kinda hope that Jeremiah is gay too, just to switch it up a little, and give a reason as to why he seems so sure his parents will get mad at him. and that could create another bash in the way of, "tyler, u being gay has made ur brother gay!" yada yada yada lol Either way, cant wait for an update!
6/23/2012 c7 PuzzledApproach
I really like this, i hope u update this again soon!
6/8/2012 c7 Rainbowelectric
Okay I've read the entire albinoapples reading selection and I must say I've enjoyed it immensely. I love getting to reading about Tyler and Kennedy and their relationship I must have a soft spot for those timid insecure guys because Tyler is just perfection. You've such a lovely way of creating and developing the chemistry between your characters. And your dialogue is just spot on. Again you have wonderful flow in your writing and your pacing is just delightful. My only sad part is bowing I'm going to have to wait before I get to read more. But don't rush on my behalf...that would be wrong. :). Okay rush a little...
6/6/2012 c7 xfffxfxfx
I've enjoyed this story. It's sweet. Not nearly as intense or sophisticated as 'Used', and it seems like the sequel or spin-off of a story I haven't read.

It's been surprisingly readable considering that the plot consists of 'I love you' 'I love you more'. I think what it is is the close attention to the day to day impressions of the protagonists. There doesn't need to be a propulsive plot, because the quiet examination of their lives is enough.

Things seem to be breaking down. Once the whole coming out thing was over with, there doesn't seem to be much more. The money thing feels a little contrived, like you're looking hard for something for them to conflict over. Money is a big deal, and does cause conflict, but that's the sense I got.

I'd suggest figuring out a way to wrap it up, and ending it. As far as I'm concerned, it's delivered on the questions it opened with (Will they get together? Will Tyler ever feel better? What were all these dramatic things in the past about?). So I'm adding it to favourites but not alerting.
5/1/2012 c6 4Madriddler
Aww this is very good so far! Can't wait for Chapter 7.
3/3/2012 c2 Nique13
At the end of May, Kenny walked across the stage and graduated, and Luke, Christopher, and Tyler were there via webcam, thanks to Kenny's parents. They gave him their congratulations, and Kenny's parents were happy to meet Kenny and Tyler.

- Did you mean that they were happy to see Christopher and Tyler?
3/3/2012 c1 Nique13
What are their ages?

Its a good start.
2/14/2012 c4 Poptart Guava King
Well now this was just the cutest chapter I could have possibly read on Valentine's Day. xD 3
3/18/2011 c1 1authorLH
Awesome! :D
2/9/2011 c3 kaoru1174
Aw that was short and sweet! i loved it. keep u[ the good work!
2/9/2011 c3 Poptart Guava King
Aw I want to make someone twinkle too...
2/3/2011 c2 kaoru1174
Aw im really enjoying this. Tyler is so likable so i hope there's good things in his future. Either way I can't wait for the next chapter. keep up the good work!
1/8/2011 c2 julliette
cant wait ti see what happens next
1/8/2011 c2 Poptart Guava King
OF COURSE ITS WORTH IMAGINING. Gosh Tyler is SUCH a downer. I still love him to death but seriously. Dude. Get over it. D: Woot for graduations! Such wonderful things that they are.
1/5/2011 c1 Poptart Guava King
I just "aw"d for about ten minutes. yea. Tyler is so LOVEABLE/HUGABLE. That's probably sympathy and pity... D:

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