for Two Peas In A Pod7/24/2011 c1 
97rust phoenix
Very interesting writing style, and a very sad story. The only thing I was not sure about was how it says "Hilary was never the same" and then in the next sentence "After a while Hilary got back in the swing of things." That part confused me a bit. I liked the imagery at the end of the one lone pea.
97rust phoenixVery interesting writing style, and a very sad story. The only thing I was not sure about was how it says "Hilary was never the same" and then in the next sentence "After a while Hilary got back in the swing of things." That part confused me a bit. I liked the imagery at the end of the one lone pea.