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12/31/2010 c1 13xOneLastingImpressionx
I could feel the narrator's sadness. It pained me to think that she will never (or so she thinks) be with the one she loves. It was good, I liked it. My only criticism is some of the rhymes sounded a little forced, but that's only my opinion. Anyway, it was really good. :)

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